Best Time Of The Year!
You can feel it in the air.3 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Corn mazes are fun and usher in the season with kids' enthusiasm. Your 3-5-3 is nicely illustrated for autumn, worded well. Good job and much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Corn mazes are fun and usher in the season with kids' enthusiasm. Your 3-5-3 is nicely illustrated for autumn, worded well. Good job and much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for such a nice review. It truly is my favorite time of year.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
with very good imagery of Autumn
and a nice touch of alliteration
Perfect picture to match the fun of fall
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
with very good imagery of Autumn
and a nice touch of alliteration
Perfect picture to match the fun of fall
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much for such a nice review.
Comment from Angela VA
It might be the best time of year for kids, but teachers dread halloween. Ha! Your poem encapsulates the joy of the fall season well. I think the picture may be a bit too menacing for the "fun" part of the poem, but then again, the scary part is fun for some. Overall, it's a good poem.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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It might be the best time of year for kids, but teachers dread halloween. Ha! Your poem encapsulates the joy of the fall season well. I think the picture may be a bit too menacing for the "fun" part of the poem, but then again, the scary part is fun for some. Overall, it's a good poem.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. Fall has always been my favorite time of year(no bugs!) and I love Halloween. I decided to take your advice and changed the picture to a more fun image. Thank you for your feedback.
