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Comment from
Bill Schott
This 2-10-2, The Assumption, uses the correct syllable set up and seems to suggest that the champagne tastes are being fed on a beer budget. Gotta love the idea that steaks are coming though.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
couldn't find a picture with just the grill, or of a chef, so...
Comment from
fayesh
I thought the first two lines were acceptable, but the last line seemed forced into two syllables. Why not "Bow wow?" Also, you forgot an "s" in the spelling of "Assumption."
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
woo-of was like a human's er-er- sort of an "oops, I got caught"
but I did forget an "S". thanks for that part, anyway.
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