Freeze Frame
2-4-6 Poem5 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
This is a good entry. Well thought out and clearly written. Snow-capped landscapes are nice to look at, but I'd hate to be stuck in it. Good work. Also, you met the contest syllable-count requirements. Good luck in the 2-4-6 Contest.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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This is a good entry. Well thought out and clearly written. Snow-capped landscapes are nice to look at, but I'd hate to be stuck in it. Good work. Also, you met the contest syllable-count requirements. Good luck in the 2-4-6 Contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer (wink)
This is a super entry for the tiny poem contest. It illustrates a lovely -- chilly -- moment in time. The presentation works great, from the font choice to the artwork. Good luck in the voting!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer (wink)
This is a super entry for the tiny poem contest. It illustrates a lovely -- chilly -- moment in time. The presentation works great, from the font choice to the artwork. Good luck in the voting!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Thank you much!
Comment from Lucian Carter
I continue to be impressed with the caliber of entries in this contest and this is no exception. Your words paint a beautiful mental picture, which is aided by the well chosen picture you used above it. Sometimes the beauty of winter gets lost under an avalanche of complaints. You remind us of it, even when it isn't here. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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I continue to be impressed with the caliber of entries in this contest and this is no exception. Your words paint a beautiful mental picture, which is aided by the well chosen picture you used above it. Sometimes the beauty of winter gets lost under an avalanche of complaints. You remind us of it, even when it isn't here. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind consideration.
Comment from giraffmang
hi there,
I liked this piece. Very good use of the format.
Beauty framed in it's prime - its - the possessive form of it is its without an apostrophe.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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hi there,
I liked this piece. Very good use of the format.
Beauty framed in it's prime - its - the possessive form of it is its without an apostrophe.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Fast fingers, plus nearsightedness. Not a good combo! Thanks for the correction.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I bet that's beautiful. If we have a super cold winter the lakes and everything freezes so good that people can go into the caves that you can't access otherwise. I've been told if you can go see them all frozen and stuff it's amazing. I've never been but I can only imagine how breathtaking it is.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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I bet that's beautiful. If we have a super cold winter the lakes and everything freezes so good that people can go into the caves that you can't access otherwise. I've been told if you can go see them all frozen and stuff it's amazing. I've never been but I can only imagine how breathtaking it is.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging and insightful comments!
