For Rhonda
a friend killed in Las Vegas12 total reviews
Comment from robina1978
Good artwork that complements your poem perfectly. I am sorry you knew someone that was killed in La Vegas. I hope it is not the Rhonda we all know. Still such an atrocious event.
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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Good artwork that complements your poem perfectly. I am sorry you knew someone that was killed in La Vegas. I hope it is not the Rhonda we all know. Still such an atrocious event.
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank for the review and kind words.
Comment from Lucian Carter
I'm touched.
How does one critique a poem that is far more about raw emotion than style? Yet, at the same time, you nailed the prescribed form perfectly. I'm sorry for your loss, but this is a worthy tribute.
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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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I'm touched.
How does one critique a poem that is far more about raw emotion than style? Yet, at the same time, you nailed the prescribed form perfectly. I'm sorry for your loss, but this is a worthy tribute.
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you. Daughter is only six. Her grandfather had just taken her back to their hotel room. So she wasn't there to see the carnage. That was a blessing.
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Silver lining I suppose.
