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16 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Love it-quite funny with it's striking picture to catch the eye and the words to get at the depth of the humor. Never saw a quack portrayed in this way.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
Love it-quite funny with it's striking picture to catch the eye and the words to get at the depth of the humor. Never saw a quack portrayed in this way.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thanks, FB
Comment from Caressa_08
Enjoyed reading this, very clever, two-part pranka, even better than the last one. And do like how you came up with a duck phobia, naming it, mallard malady...trying desperately it would seem to become uncursed, this duck hunter then seeks to find help, possibly now, with a psych doc that he too, appears to him to be another duck...making it out to be an exceptionally funny poem...C.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
Enjoyed reading this, very clever, two-part pranka, even better than the last one. And do like how you came up with a duck phobia, naming it, mallard malady...trying desperately it would seem to become uncursed, this duck hunter then seeks to find help, possibly now, with a psych doc that he too, appears to him to be another duck...making it out to be an exceptionally funny poem...C.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Caressa, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very cute poem about the duck. It is quite comical the wording you used and the imagery with the picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I did not see any spags. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
This is a very well written and very cute poem about the duck. It is quite comical the wording you used and the imagery with the picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I did not see any spags. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Dawn Munro
Is that a duck you've got hanging around your neck, or have you been out at night again? Don't you know our duvet's getting lonely? Down under they use geese for Christmas. Now that's talkin' turkey.
Wait. Wrong bird? Oh hell, waddled into that one... What can a Canuck say? (HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!)
("You'll be okay.")
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
Is that a duck you've got hanging around your neck, or have you been out at night again? Don't you know our duvet's getting lonely? Down under they use geese for Christmas. Now that's talkin' turkey.
Wait. Wrong bird? Oh hell, waddled into that one... What can a Canuck say? (HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!)
("You'll be okay.")
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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I think I need to lie down now.
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Smelling salts help. Ducks often don't need 'em 'cuz of the salt marshes and the hole in the ozone...
Waddaya mean, ya don't understand what I'm sayin'?
What are ya, a bird-brain? (HAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA!)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Bill,
This was a fun read. I enjoyed the references to 'duck things--daffy, mallard malady & the alliteration--dying drake, limit/lake, Doc/duck.
The picture is perfect & the large font size seems right. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
Bill,
This was a fun read. I enjoyed the references to 'duck things--daffy, mallard malady & the alliteration--dying drake, limit/lake, Doc/duck.
The picture is perfect & the large font size seems right. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Jan, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Ulla
Oh Dear, Bill, you make me laugh so much. So here you are. A six for this and a few others when I didn't have any left. I love your daft poems. They are just so funny. You're so talented. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
Oh Dear, Bill, you make me laugh so much. So here you are. A six for this and a few others when I didn't have any left. I love your daft poems. They are just so funny. You're so talented. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Ulla, for the fantastic review and the nice comments. Bill
Comment from LIJ Red
Saw that in a movie. Guys yells "Duck!" just before a duck knocks his companion senseless. Cursed by a wounded drake...sheer justice. Excellent humor poem.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
Saw that in a movie. Guys yells "Duck!" just before a duck knocks his companion senseless. Cursed by a wounded drake...sheer justice. Excellent humor poem.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thanks, LIJ, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Your ducks are ducky my friend. I am in awe. There is something enchanting about your series of poems and short works. I surely hope you end up doing something with all of these. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
Your ducks are ducky my friend. I am in awe. There is something enchanting about your series of poems and short works. I surely hope you end up doing something with all of these. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Thanks, kiwi, for the encouragement.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hey Bill.........
Really loving these duck capers, you've certainly got a vivid imagination and a perfect picture as well.....a real duck dynasty
Mitchell
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
Hey Bill.........
Really loving these duck capers, you've certainly got a vivid imagination and a perfect picture as well.....a real duck dynasty
Mitchell
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Mitchell.
Comment from nomi338
Duck, duck, mallard
I think I'm in love with Florence Ballard*
Everywhere I look all that I can see
Duck after duck coming after me.
At last, someone else is suffering from this malady
O wonder if it's a curse or an allergy
If you find someone who'll help please send them to me.
-The late Florence Ballard was a singer with the original Motown group the Supremes, on whom I had a mad crush for years.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
Duck, duck, mallard
I think I'm in love with Florence Ballard*
Everywhere I look all that I can see
Duck after duck coming after me.
At last, someone else is suffering from this malady
O wonder if it's a curse or an allergy
If you find someone who'll help please send them to me.
-The late Florence Ballard was a singer with the original Motown group the Supremes, on whom I had a mad crush for years.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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I'd send you to my doctor, but he's a quack.