Comment from RodG

Excellent

Good pairing of photo and poem
I your description of Mary is very visual and you kept with tradition by giving her a cat. She also seems to be a British witch if "bloody" is meant to be slang.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

She is British I guess. Don't Americans use that word as a slang adjective? Thanks for critiquing.

reply by RodG on 08-Oct-2017

IAmericans might use it somewhere, but it's not a common expression here like it is in England.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Bloody Mary? a very short piece that is a delight for the up-coming Holloween holiday. Very well written and the picture complements your poem. Don and Vicki.

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Thank you so much.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Holy Crap, that's good. I love the picture, it looks like she coming out of the screen at me. This is very well written and I love the last line.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Thank you papa.