Night of the Hunter
a Joseph's Star entry4 total reviews
Comment from Leineco
Bravo! You have met all the stringent restrictions of this
form AND painted a compelling vision!
I especially applaud your adherence to the "complete statements"
constriction!
Nicely done :-)
(5 stars) = EXCELLENT. I would recommend this to a friend! I enjoyed the read and found both the content and the construction admirably accomplished.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
Bravo! You have met all the stringent restrictions of this
form AND painted a compelling vision!
I especially applaud your adherence to the "complete statements"
constriction!
Nicely done :-)
(5 stars) = EXCELLENT. I would recommend this to a friend! I enjoyed the read and found both the content and the construction admirably accomplished.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind consideration. It was a challenge, but I enjoyed it.
Comment from angel123
Your nature poem is well-written. It painted vivid images in my mind. It was well received and it held my attention. I also like your artwork choice. Best wishes
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
Your nature poem is well-written. It painted vivid images in my mind. It was well received and it held my attention. I also like your artwork choice. Best wishes
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your Joseph Star writing prompt. You followed all the rules for number of lines and statements and you chose an appropriate picture.
All the best.
Marybell1
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
I enjoyed reading your Joseph Star writing prompt. You followed all the rules for number of lines and statements and you chose an appropriate picture.
All the best.
Marybell1
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the positive feedback!
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Five stars because I love it, very descriptive and well written BUT I probably should have given it a 4 because 'he is hungry' is 4 syllables. Can fix with 'he's hungry' or whatever you decide. (Giving you a 5 with confidence you'll fix it) :-) Beautiful choice of artwork. Also - author's notes - ...perch [[Im - in]] trees. (I love Whippoorwills) Great poem!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
Five stars because I love it, very descriptive and well written BUT I probably should have given it a 4 because 'he is hungry' is 4 syllables. Can fix with 'he's hungry' or whatever you decide. (Giving you a 5 with confidence you'll fix it) :-) Beautiful choice of artwork. Also - author's notes - ...perch [[Im - in]] trees. (I love Whippoorwills) Great poem!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Appreciate the heads up on the syllable count - revised it so many times, I lost count! Will definitely revise. Thanks for the review and stars.
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You're welcome. I know the feeling! Good luck in the contest!