Autumn
The season is personified.26 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your words leave Autumn in the hands of winter frost, we should enjoy the colours before they fade, your words are a moment in time and a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Your words leave Autumn in the hands of winter frost, we should enjoy the colours before they fade, your words are a moment in time and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed my Campion, Dolly. Thank you for sharing. Rod
Comment from Oatmeal
This is a beautiful poem. I liked it very much. It made for an enjoyable read. Very well reflected thoughts and opinions. The flow was smooth. The theme well thought out.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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This is a beautiful poem. I liked it very much. It made for an enjoyable read. Very well reflected thoughts and opinions. The flow was smooth. The theme well thought out.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Oatmeal, for your very kind praise of "Autumn." This form of verse is fairly new to me. Rod
Comment from krys123
Greetings, My, Anonymous Poet;
-while reading to your excellently written piece of poetry I realized one part of your poem in one verse, "she crimsons crowns...."; are you actually trying to say a reddish crown...? It's a good alliteration as I just never heard this before...
-Once I got over this little hump, I thought your poem was very well written , to the point picture imagery was demonstratively descriptive as well is definitively and vividly expressive throughout.
-This imagery created and enjambment to flow smoothly throughout the writing without much of a syntactical or grammatical error in your writing. Excellent!
-A wonderful picture that is absolutely relative and supportive to you conceptual theme.
-You have all the best of luck in the contest and may peaceful happiness always be with you.
Alex
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Greetings, My, Anonymous Poet;
-while reading to your excellently written piece of poetry I realized one part of your poem in one verse, "she crimsons crowns...."; are you actually trying to say a reddish crown...? It's a good alliteration as I just never heard this before...
-Once I got over this little hump, I thought your poem was very well written , to the point picture imagery was demonstratively descriptive as well is definitively and vividly expressive throughout.
-This imagery created and enjambment to flow smoothly throughout the writing without much of a syntactical or grammatical error in your writing. Excellent!
-A wonderful picture that is absolutely relative and supportive to you conceptual theme.
-You have all the best of luck in the contest and may peaceful happiness always be with you.
Alex
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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I truly appreciate your very kind praise of "Autumn," Alex, and your comments. I did convert "crimsons" into a verb, hoping it would suggest how Autumn painted those trees red. Rod
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I realize that you must've changed Crimson into a verb. You are very welcome RodG and take care and peace and harmony to you friend.
Alex
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Autumn, creates a delightful character of Autumn. As she 'crimsons crowns of trees' and 'trims in chestnut flounce', the beauty of the season becomes a bright and lively decoration. Nice.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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This free verse, Autumn, creates a delightful character of Autumn. As she 'crimsons crowns of trees' and 'trims in chestnut flounce', the beauty of the season becomes a bright and lively decoration. Nice.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Bill, for your enthusiastic response to "Autumn." I am especially pleased you enjoyed my imagery. Thanks also for the galaxy of stars. Rod
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about Autumn and its beautiful sceneries created by nature for our eyes to enjoy. Unfortunately, it comes with a price, we have to withstand winter's cold.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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A very well-written poem about Autumn and its beautiful sceneries created by nature for our eyes to enjoy. Unfortunately, it comes with a price, we have to withstand winter's cold.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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I am delighted your eyes enjoyed my Campion, Sandra. Thanks so much for sharing. Rod
Comment from WalkerMan
Though I normally prefer rhyme in poetry, I like this effective personification of Autumn in this Campion. Thank you for defining the style in the Notes. Well done and aptly illustrated.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Though I normally prefer rhyme in poetry, I like this effective personification of Autumn in this Campion. Thank you for defining the style in the Notes. Well done and aptly illustrated.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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I, too, prefer rhyme in poetry, but for this contest I tried something different--the Campion. I am very pleased you enjoyed it. Rod
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You are welcome, Rod. Yes, I did enjoy it; and apparently enough others did too, as I see you did well in the contest. Congratulations. -- Mike
Comment from jenintorre
I think this free verse poem about Autumn is a really good contender for the competition
As it is very different in it's approach. Stunning picture to enhance the words. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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I think this free verse poem about Autumn is a really good contender for the competition
As it is very different in it's approach. Stunning picture to enhance the words. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Usually I write traditional rhymed verse, so this Campion was a challenge. I am delighted you enjoyed it and the chosen artwork. Rod
Comment from smileycloud
beautiful word imagery
there are many endearing and vivid words in here
the poem brings autumn to life and she is a real character in your verses
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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beautiful word imagery
there are many endearing and vivid words in here
the poem brings autumn to life and she is a real character in your verses
have a smiley day
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed personifying Autumn, and I'm delighted you like the results. Thank you so much for sharing and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Allyzeé
I like the natural flow of the lines, they keep me engaged into continue to read and enjoy your poem, this has been my favorite of the Autumn poems.
Good luck on the contest.
Best wishes
Allyzeé
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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I like the natural flow of the lines, they keep me engaged into continue to read and enjoy your poem, this has been my favorite of the Autumn poems.
Good luck on the contest.
Best wishes
Allyzeé
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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I am very flattered you liked my entry the best. I do not write free verse that often, so your kind praise of "Autumn" is much appreciated. Rod
Comment from GracieAnn
Autumn Free Verse writing prompt entry is fresh and creative with its personification of Autumn's femininity. I liked turning a noun color into a verb in crimson. I do that for fun. Makes writing creative and adds humor. Nicely done in the choice of words in describing a gregarious personality. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Autumn Free Verse writing prompt entry is fresh and creative with its personification of Autumn's femininity. I liked turning a noun color into a verb in crimson. I do that for fun. Makes writing creative and adds humor. Nicely done in the choice of words in describing a gregarious personality. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed the poem and especially my use of language. Indeed, it is fun to use old words in new ways. Thank you so much for sharing and your kind praise.
