Nanna's Treasures
3-5-3 entry4 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello June Sargent: Until I read your poem I didn't realized that memories are spiritual food. Your poem prepared a table for me and fed me an overflowing helping of the concept of people joining together forever; for the sake of love; and doing it in an enduring way.
It's everlasting, unforgettable; that's what the life of love is. It reminds matrimony binds.
I "CAN" remember you. But I "CAN'T" forget you, Love.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hello June Sargent: Until I read your poem I didn't realized that memories are spiritual food. Your poem prepared a table for me and fed me an overflowing helping of the concept of people joining together forever; for the sake of love; and doing it in an enduring way.
It's everlasting, unforgettable; that's what the life of love is. It reminds matrimony binds.
I "CAN" remember you. But I "CAN'T" forget you, Love.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much for your insightful review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Nanna's Treasures, has the proper syllable count and directs our attention to a few plates that serve to honor a lifetime of married bliss and the people who lived it together. Neat.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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This 3-5-3, Nanna's Treasures, has the proper syllable count and directs our attention to a few plates that serve to honor a lifetime of married bliss and the people who lived it together. Neat.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much for your insightful review.
Comment from Lucian Carter
Well done. A great 3/5/3 with a ton of atmosphere and style. Each and every line is powerful, together they form a powerful unit.
Is that your picture? Or did it inspire the piece?
Best of luck with it.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Well done. A great 3/5/3 with a ton of atmosphere and style. Each and every line is powerful, together they form a powerful unit.
Is that your picture? Or did it inspire the piece?
Best of luck with it.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your kind review! I do have a dish my grandfather brought over from the old country - buts and pieces of our lives.
Comment from nbonner
It's so nice to have memories. They are something that cannot be replaced. Nicely written 3-5-3 poem. Thank you for sharing, NB
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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It's so nice to have memories. They are something that cannot be replaced. Nicely written 3-5-3 poem. Thank you for sharing, NB
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Appreciate your taking the time to stop by for a read and review.
