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Comment from Thomas Bowling
I just figured out what your profile picture reminds me of. When I didn't have a beard and had a fu man chu moustache, one of my college professors used to call me Larry Csonka.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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I just figured out what your profile picture reminds me of. When I didn't have a beard and had a fu man chu moustache, one of my college professors used to call me Larry Csonka.
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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My wife and kids call me Mr. Schott because they think I look like me.
Comment from F. Wehr3
Funny poem, Bill. I'm glad pointed out that Walri isn't a word. I was going to look that one up, lol. Maybe you could move your comma to after oysters. As it stands now you're separating the subject from the verb.
Take care,
Russell
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Funny poem, Bill. I'm glad pointed out that Walri isn't a word. I was going to look that one up, lol. Maybe you could move your comma to after oysters. As it stands now you're separating the subject from the verb.
Take care,
Russell
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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I 'de-commaed' it.
