Comment from frogbook

Excellent

What a wonderful job of rhyme and alliteration and a bit of a tongue twister too! Full of great humor and clever wording. A masterpiece among walrus.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks, FB, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Waldo was a bad boy, and probably bilked people for a lot of money. Fortune telling is a hoax, but people still fall for it.

Good meter and rhyme.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thanks, da

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Hey, I think that's the guy who took me for a small bundle back in the day. They caught him? Good give that fool life without parole, for all the bad things he did, the money he stole. And for God's sake, keep him away from the telephone.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you, nomi, for reviewing.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Well done, a cute poem with a clever play on words.
These Walrus World poems are a lot of fun.
Thanks for sharing and I hope there will be more.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thanks, Sharon, for giving this look Bill.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

So, was the Walrus shot for his misdeeds? Another delightful rhyming tale about your walruses. I loved the thought of a walrus using a laptop. Well done,

~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

He was given a job at the NSA.