Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a good contest entry for the loop contest. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the loop style. The picture is perfect for your well chosen words. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Jan. I am so glad you liked it. Take care and have a nice evening.

Comment from writerjen

Excellent

Nicely written loop poem entry. I think you followed the requirements of the contest. Great descriptive language. Your poem portrayed emotion and reader felt the sadness of the poet in the verses. Great job.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. Take care and have a nice evening.

Comment from StanNJ

Excellent

Dear Idamarty,
Your poem captures the sadness of grief very poignantly. Crowds can make one feel yet more alone it seems. Well done.
Best wishes in the Loop poetry contest.
Stan

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Hi,

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Too true! Crowds can definitely make one feel more alone. Thanks for your input. Have a nice evening.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Wow this is so beautiful, yet sad. Very well written and I love the rhyme. I tryed to write a loop poem and found it difficult. This seems like a strong contest entry. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked it. Take care and have a nice evening.

Comment from poetwatch

Exceptional

This is a very heart-breaking poem of sorrow. You learned to write beautifully. I'm happy you rhymed this poem though I'm a little sad at the feeling it left me. I sincerely wish you the best of luck on the contest. Thank you very much for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Thanks so much poetwatch, for reading and reviewing and the six stars. I truly appreciate them and I am so glad you liked it. Also glad it stirred up emotion. Take care and have a nice evening.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good entry for the Loop Poetry contest.
The picture is beautiful as is the poem.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon


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 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Sharon. Have a wonderful day!

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I enjoyed your loop poem contest entry today :) Yours is the first one where I think I understand the make-up of this poetry form. I like it a lot. It's similar to the double echo poetry form.

I can connect with your theme of sorrow as we wait for test results to see what is wrong with my 90 year old mother. I'm still very much attached to her and hope it's something they can fix.

Best wishes in this contest.

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 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Hi Joy,

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I understand completely how you want to hold on to your mother. Unfortunately I lost mine when she was only 74. It will be ten years December 4th and I miss her with all of my heart everyday. Thank you again and I will say a prayer for your mother.