~ Simple Pleasures ~
ABC Poem - (2nd Place)19 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
I know, right?? The simple pleasures are the real ones, and always the best, and as you said, available to all. This is such a great ABC entry!!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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I know, right?? The simple pleasures are the real ones, and always the best, and as you said, available to all. This is such a great ABC entry!!! Blessings...
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Irish Rain, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This ABC poem is a very strong contender for the contest entry. I love the different way you rhymed the lines and made it flow so smoothly
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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This ABC poem is a very strong contender for the contest entry. I love the different way you rhymed the lines and made it flow so smoothly
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Barb, thank you so very much for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A nice entry for the ABC Poetry contest.
Yes life has hurdles, but as we pass each one we grow.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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A nice entry for the ABC Poetry contest.
Yes life has hurdles, but as we pass each one we grow.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you Sharon. I appreciate your review and contest wishes. ~DD
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks man should know how to live life simply and enjoy it with pleasures infinite as Nature provides ample pleasures since morning with smell, colours, movements and melodies; I liked.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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This speaks man should know how to live life simply and enjoy it with pleasures infinite as Nature provides ample pleasures since morning with smell, colours, movements and melodies; I liked.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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AlcreatorLittDear, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a great, simple poem about counting ones blessings. You list simple pleasures great and small that make you smile:
Dressed in soft pastels, its signature mark, the rainbow smiles widely with its upside down arc.
Poem reads like a prayer of thanksgiving. You wrote it with emotive lines of gratitude.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you much contest success with this fine entry.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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This is a great, simple poem about counting ones blessings. You list simple pleasures great and small that make you smile:
Dressed in soft pastels, its signature mark, the rainbow smiles widely with its upside down arc.
Poem reads like a prayer of thanksgiving. You wrote it with emotive lines of gratitude.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you much contest success with this fine entry.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Sis Cat, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and so true poem you have penned for the ABC contest. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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This is a very beautiful and so true poem you have penned for the ABC contest. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Teri, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An appreciation of bird song, the simple pleasures that make life worth living, your words are warm, uplifting and a joy to read, I feel the same humbling at nature, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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An appreciation of bird song, the simple pleasures that make life worth living, your words are warm, uplifting and a joy to read, I feel the same humbling at nature, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Hi Dolly, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from JennaG
Very nicely done, DD! This is a nice reminder of the good things to be found and experienced in life. The message is an important and timely one, especially as we enter the holiday season and all the stress that comes with it. Sometimes we truly need to just stop and appreciate the simple things. This is well written and I especially like the rhyme you incorporated into the piece. Beautiful artwork, too! Well done! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Very nicely done, DD! This is a nice reminder of the good things to be found and experienced in life. The message is an important and timely one, especially as we enter the holiday season and all the stress that comes with it. Sometimes we truly need to just stop and appreciate the simple things. This is well written and I especially like the rhyme you incorporated into the piece. Beautiful artwork, too! Well done! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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JennaG, thank you so very much for taking the time to review my ABC poem. I found your comments encouraging and appreciate the contest wishes. ~DD
Comment from doggymad
A wonderful write. It is full of bright and serene images that make the reader appreciate the things that are free and delightful.
I wish you luck in the contest with this lovely write
hugs
Freda
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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A wonderful write. It is full of bright and serene images that make the reader appreciate the things that are free and delightful.
I wish you luck in the contest with this lovely write
hugs
Freda
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Freda, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
