When The Stars Shine
Love under the sky...8 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
This is a beautiful ballad shared between two hearts in the throes of first love. It is truly worthy of 6 stars.
All the best in the contest.
Eugene
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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This is a beautiful ballad shared between two hearts in the throes of first love. It is truly worthy of 6 stars.
All the best in the contest.
Eugene
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate it. I'm always grateful for the opinions of my fellow writers.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
This is another poem that reminds me of that excitement that I felt when I realized that I finally found my true love. I know this anxiousness and the thoughts that hang around all day and cannot get rid of until that next time together. The moon and the stars will always shine and the shine will always shine. I know this wonderful feeling and your poem expresses it very well. It is very lovely.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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This is another poem that reminds me of that excitement that I felt when I realized that I finally found my true love. I know this anxiousness and the thoughts that hang around all day and cannot get rid of until that next time together. The moon and the stars will always shine and the shine will always shine. I know this wonderful feeling and your poem expresses it very well. It is very lovely.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you for such a nice review. I always value your opinion.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem about love and his much you think about him when he is not around when Theo stars shine at night or the moon rises, even irn the day time he is missed.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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A very well-written love poem about love and his much you think about him when he is not around when Theo stars shine at night or the moon rises, even irn the day time he is missed.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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I always appreciate hearing from you, l value your opinion.Thanks for taking the time to read.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Author
Yes I give you a well deserved five*****
your free verse poem with the nice refrains
When the stars shine bright,
When the moon shines bright,
When the sun finally rises,
and really like your last stanza.
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Hello Author
Yes I give you a well deserved five*****
your free verse poem with the nice refrains
When the stars shine bright,
When the moon shines bright,
When the sun finally rises,
and really like your last stanza.
Gert
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thank you for such a,kind review.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Love poem writing prompt.
The picture is beautiful and a good match for your poem.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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This is a good entry for the Love poem writing prompt.
The picture is beautiful and a good match for your poem.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.I really appreciate it! :)
Comment from Ricky1024
This love poem contest part is based on their awaiting of the loved one to come to enjoy the sunshine the moon's glow perhaps but but love is ever leading a lot of love there's too much cheating so it's on again off again switch-a-roo time for me and for you good luck with this had great theme and imagery with no grammar issues talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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This love poem contest part is based on their awaiting of the loved one to come to enjoy the sunshine the moon's glow perhaps but but love is ever leading a lot of love there's too much cheating so it's on again off again switch-a-roo time for me and for you good luck with this had great theme and imagery with no grammar issues talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your comments, I always appreciate hearing from fellow wtiters.
Comment from Natali Holden
I like how it had the repetition going, even though it wasn't always the exact same wording. A really cool idea. The rhyming was also great. You ended it perfectly. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Natali ;)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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I like how it had the repetition going, even though it wasn't always the exact same wording. A really cool idea. The rhyming was also great. You ended it perfectly. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Natali ;)
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks feelings and ecstasy of romanticism in all moments and how different it is felt at different space of time of a day and how it continues; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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This speaks feelings and ecstasy of romanticism in all moments and how different it is felt at different space of time of a day and how it continues; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem, it's always appreciated.