Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Well red is Well written it flowed well with no grammar issues I checked if an object of contents were excellent and descriptive measures we're in place thanks for this and have a wonderful holiday dr. Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017

Thanks, Dr Ricky. Have a great new year. Bill

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks revelation of characters as humans, but conflicts came up, on the surface they reverted to DNA types minus their human attributes; climax yet to mature; I like. DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017

Thanks, ALD.

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Bill,

I still see you are still writing about the aardvark. I love the script and the dialogue between the characters. You gave them unique personalities and personified to think human-like.

I hope you had a merry Christmas, Bill. Enjoy the reminding of your holiday.

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 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017

Thanks, PF.