Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is lovely. Simple and direct. The image and your words together make a great combination. The simplicity of the desert is described nicely in your poem. Marilyn

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018

Thank you for your review

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A good 3-5-3 Nature prompt contest entry. I thought the photo was perfect for your subject and added the right touch. Good luck on this contest. Regards.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 3-5-3 poem you have penned for the prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and great art work of the pretty picture. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thank you for your review

reply by Teri7 on 06-Jan-2018

you are so welcome!

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

I like the way you use the word picturesque here, it's wonderful to see it taking up a whole line of the poem. This is a very beautiful and evocative poem. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thank you for your review

reply by oliver818 on 06-Jan-2018