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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Shining Light"Eclectic style
6 total reviews
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I love the message this poem radiates. I love reading poetry. I love the photo. I love your words. I see you give the celestial orb the power of she with the beauty of silver.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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I love the message this poem radiates. I love reading poetry. I love the photo. I love your words. I see you give the celestial orb the power of she with the beauty of silver.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Welcome! Thank you for reading my poetry. Your review was positive and validating.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Trisha.
-The imagery is effective,
and I like how your
poem is arranged by couplets.
-I also like the image
"silver globe" and how
you describe what it does.
-The concluding two lines
are very good, too.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Trisha.
-The imagery is effective,
and I like how your
poem is arranged by couplets.
-I also like the image
"silver globe" and how
you describe what it does.
-The concluding two lines
are very good, too.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thanks Pam, your reviews are important to me. I am always trying to become more expressive. I?m glad you enjoyed the poem
Hugs,Trisha
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You are very welcome, Trisha, and I appreciate your reply. I did enjoy the poem.
Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
Wow! This is beautifully well written! The picture is perfect and I love that you used the black background. It makes the words look like they shine like the moon!
Very well done and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Wow! This is beautifully well written! The picture is perfect and I love that you used the black background. It makes the words look like they shine like the moon!
Very well done and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Hi Elizabeth, thanks for stopping to read my poem. You reviewed very complimentarily. I?m glad you enjoyed Shining Light
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an ambient write about the moon's cycles. Last night the moon's finger nail next to the Cathedral and it was a sight to behold, your poem is a perfect accompaniment to the scene I viewed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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This is an ambient write about the moon's cycles. Last night the moon's finger nail next to the Cathedral and it was a sight to behold, your poem is a perfect accompaniment to the scene I viewed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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The heavens are frequently taken for granted. I wonder how many people go indoors without even glancing upwards .Thank you for your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a well-written, very descriptive poem. It has a nice flow great choice of words and rhymes well. Your artwork fits perfectly.Good luck on your contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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This is a well-written, very descriptive poem. It has a nice flow great choice of words and rhymes well. Your artwork fits perfectly.Good luck on your contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thank you very much for your complimentary review.
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
Your poem is well done, very polished. But, I cannot take my eyes off of that photo. Spectacular view of your silver globe. Lovely, lovely poem of the most beautiful scene in nature--moon rise over water. Great job.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Your poem is well done, very polished. But, I cannot take my eyes off of that photo. Spectacular view of your silver globe. Lovely, lovely poem of the most beautiful scene in nature--moon rise over water. Great job.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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I agree, and there are more beautiful colored full moons to mesmerize us thank you for your appreciation of my post.
Hugs, Trisha
