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Poems By AnnieDawn

Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Smile"
My book of poems and stories

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Comment from tempeste
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That's something I don't do often ,smile.
I always see the glass half empty ,while others see it half full.

I'm trying to work on being more positive too but its hard ..you know the saying :you cant teach new tricks to an old dog.

I love the pic ...I'm more comfortable with pets than with people.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
    Thank you so much for your great review. Have a good day.
Comment from angel123
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Thank you for inspiring with a twist of humor. I enjoyed reading your poem and I also like your artwork choice. Thank you also for including your author notes. I'm working on not complaining also.

Angel123

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
    Thanks so much for your review. I appreciate your time.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This senryu about yourself, Smile, uses twelve syllables to give some good advice to the readers. I see , by your notes, that this is in contrast to your usual approach. Good ideas.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
    Thanks so much for your review. I appreciate your time.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks smile is worthwhile in each course of positive living for negativism makes no righteous living, positive attitude helps most; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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This reminds me of the prayer, Lord give me the strength to accept what I cannot change. In your case, accept it and do it with a smile. I love your poem. You nailed it for me. I need to put your poem, and artwork, on my refrigerator for other family members. Love the dog. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much.