It's In My DNA
I may be too old to change...35 total reviews
Comment from Fabiha_N
This is a really well-written poem!
I love the flow to the words, and the funny way in which you wrote it.
I also like how you bolded some of the first and last lines.
I know a lot of people who are like you too! Maybe it's a little overdoing things, but it's still fun!
Great work :)
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This is a really well-written poem!
I love the flow to the words, and the funny way in which you wrote it.
I also like how you bolded some of the first and last lines.
I know a lot of people who are like you too! Maybe it's a little overdoing things, but it's still fun!
Great work :)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Hello!
Fabiha_N
This was a really fun one to pen!
Thank you for your complimentary review!
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this joyful read. I can relate to this on many levels. Your rhyme and sequencing were spot on and enjoyable. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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I love this joyful read. I can relate to this on many levels. Your rhyme and sequencing were spot on and enjoyable. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Hello Sugarray77!
I am so pleased you enjoy my offering! It was joyful to pen.
Thank you for your complimentary and positive review!
Comment from l.raven
your poem made me laugh...a lot reminds me of me....and yes...stockings for every form of life in the house...and food to spare...and I don't have a tree in every room....but two...and the one in the front window...is bigger than the living room...LOL....I enjoyed reading your poem...and I love your picture...yum...yum...so very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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your poem made me laugh...a lot reminds me of me....and yes...stockings for every form of life in the house...and food to spare...and I don't have a tree in every room....but two...and the one in the front window...is bigger than the living room...LOL....I enjoyed reading your poem...and I love your picture...yum...yum...so very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Hello Linda!
So very pleased that you enjoy my verse. Those really are my pies that I baked. Tomorrow, I am supposed to bake a mincemeat pie for m husband! Too funny!
Thank you for your positive and complimentary review!
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you are sooo very welcome...and I love mincemeat pies...yum...xxoo love
Comment from mermaids
This is great. Nothing wrong with Overdo Di. You sound like a giving and fun person. I like several Christmas trees in the house and stockings for the pets, it adds to life. You have created a cheerful poem.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This is great. Nothing wrong with Overdo Di. You sound like a giving and fun person. I like several Christmas trees in the house and stockings for the pets, it adds to life. You have created a cheerful poem.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Hello mermaids,
I am so pleased you enjoy my offering. It was such a fun verse to pen! We all need a little cheer these days!
Thank you for your complimentary and positive review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about not being perfect. You try very hard to please everybody, but maybe you over do it sometimes. The nothing doers are just as imperfect as you.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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A very well-written poem about not being perfect. You try very hard to please everybody, but maybe you over do it sometimes. The nothing doers are just as imperfect as you.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Hello Sandra!
Whew! Old habits die hard!
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Comment from Boogienights
I think I must differ with you...I think you are perfect! You remind me of my daughter who likes to make everyone happy by doin things up big. It's love that motivates her and a desire to make others happy. Keep on doing what you do and keep on writing, as you are a fine poet.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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I think I must differ with you...I think you are perfect! You remind me of my daughter who likes to make everyone happy by doin things up big. It's love that motivates her and a desire to make others happy. Keep on doing what you do and keep on writing, as you are a fine poet.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Hello Boogienights.
So glad you enjoyed!
Thank you!
Comment from Gloria ....
What a fun poem, author. Overdoing everything, but it sounds like good times to me. Of course pets must have their own stockings and a Christmas tree in every room? Why not. The more the merrier right. So what is that you aren't perfect about? lol.
Super job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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What a fun poem, author. Overdoing everything, but it sounds like good times to me. Of course pets must have their own stockings and a Christmas tree in every room? Why not. The more the merrier right. So what is that you aren't perfect about? lol.
Super job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Hello Gloria!
Thank you for the complimentary review!
And I didn't even mention the other holidays, or birthdays, or...baking cookies!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, I am coming for a stay, mystery writer. This is fantastic, I love this poem, lol. Terrific. I can totally relate I'm an over-doer as well, everything is done in excessive amounts, especially when cooking, lol OMG! I laughed through this entire poem. I love how you formatted this it all tied together wonderful and had a great rhyme. Nice job! Good luck to you! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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lol, I am coming for a stay, mystery writer. This is fantastic, I love this poem, lol. Terrific. I can totally relate I'm an over-doer as well, everything is done in excessive amounts, especially when cooking, lol OMG! I laughed through this entire poem. I love how you formatted this it all tied together wonderful and had a great rhyme. Nice job! Good luck to you! ~Kerry
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Hah!
Thank you ever so much for this joyful and complimentary review, Kerry!
I was thinking of baking an apple pie today...just in case visitors appear at the door!
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lol, I may be coming, I'll bring an extra pie, lol
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some home made pie made by Di, sounds very welcoming and you know how to treat your guests. A delightful and unusual write filled with the riches of life, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Some home made pie made by Di, sounds very welcoming and you know how to treat your guests. A delightful and unusual write filled with the riches of life, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Hello Dolly!
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review.
Coffee's on! Apple pie later today. I just never know when a visitor may appear at the front door!
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I might pop in! He he he x x x
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I'll put the "kettle on!" :)
Comment from jdrhye
Cute poem that is absolutely relatable. I like the flow and the tone. The imagery is good and carries the reader through each splurge of energy, indulgence and high expectations. A high achiever in making those around you comforted with love.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Cute poem that is absolutely relatable. I like the flow and the tone. The imagery is good and carries the reader through each splurge of energy, indulgence and high expectations. A high achiever in making those around you comforted with love.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Hello!
Thank you for enjoying my imperfections and for the thoughtful review!
