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Can't stop!10 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Love this! The really funny thing is I am overly frugal...my husband says I squeeze a dime so tight I make two nickels....BUT your rhyme, your wit, the pace of it....(hey that rhymes!)-- you had me smiling wide and enjoying first purchase to last....
Besides who couldn't' use 20 pairs of running shoes!
Such a romp!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Love this! The really funny thing is I am overly frugal...my husband says I squeeze a dime so tight I make two nickels....BUT your rhyme, your wit, the pace of it....(hey that rhymes!)-- you had me smiling wide and enjoying first purchase to last....
Besides who couldn't' use 20 pairs of running shoes!
Such a romp!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reading, I really appreciate hearing from fellow writers.
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You are welcome!---Karenina
Comment from samantha0930
I like your poem, it's really funny. The comic you used for your picture goes really well with it too. I impulse buy as well, but maybe not that extremely :P
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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I like your poem, it's really funny. The comic you used for your picture goes really well with it too. I impulse buy as well, but maybe not that extremely :P
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for such a nice review.
Comment from Katie Solis
Hilarious ð???. I can almost 100% relate. I love the rhyme scheme, I even shared this with my husband who says you are a great writer. My favorite part was when you wrote Blue-Ray, not DVD. I feel like the words "of course" were implied. Good job.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Hilarious ð???. I can almost 100% relate. I love the rhyme scheme, I even shared this with my husband who says you are a great writer. My favorite part was when you wrote Blue-Ray, not DVD. I feel like the words "of course" were implied. Good job.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for such a nice review, I really appreciate hearing from my fellow writers.
Comment from amada
I found my husband in here! We could open our own book store, too many books everywhere. I love these lines specially " :I'm sure that we'll make due. Without electricity for a bit, without the internet too. I know it's wrong and it's a flaw..."
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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I found my husband in here! We could open our own book store, too many books everywhere. I love these lines specially " :I'm sure that we'll make due. Without electricity for a bit, without the internet too. I know it's wrong and it's a flaw..."
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you for such a great review, your husband has good taste buying books! Thanks,for taking the time to read my poem.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Haha! Too true! Excellent poem flows well and fits the prompt perfectly. Only found a couple typos -
A year[[']]s supply of cereal, (add apostrophe - year's)
A day of buying [[lot's - no apostrophe, lots]] of junk,
That's it. Great job!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Haha! Too true! Excellent poem flows well and fits the prompt perfectly. Only found a couple typos -
A year[[']]s supply of cereal, (add apostrophe - year's)
A day of buying [[lot's - no apostrophe, lots]] of junk,
That's it. Great job!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review and pointing out those typos. I really appreciate it.
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You're very welcome
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a perfect poem for this competition. Where ever did you find that drawing. I started reading with a smile on my face. What more can you ask from an illustration. Every line was clever. Most lines made me smile. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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What a perfect poem for this competition. Where ever did you find that drawing. I started reading with a smile on my face. What more can you ask from an illustration. Every line was clever. Most lines made me smile. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review, I'm so glad you liked it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the decision of buying it at last, without thinking of resources to make use; flaw is everywhere, and none is perfect; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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This speaks the decision of buying it at last, without thinking of resources to make use; flaw is everywhere, and none is perfect; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, I always appreciate your opinion.
Comment from Sherman541
True that is, we all have flaws and some more prominent than others. So who is throwing the blame, not I, that is for sure. I can see where, buying things can become very addictive. It is the same, as having one more drink, or just a little won't hurt to try, or this price is such a great deal for what you get! Love the poem, very comical, fun to read and so true:) Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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True that is, we all have flaws and some more prominent than others. So who is throwing the blame, not I, that is for sure. I can see where, buying things can become very addictive. It is the same, as having one more drink, or just a little won't hurt to try, or this price is such a great deal for what you get! Love the poem, very comical, fun to read and so true:) Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem, I really appreciate it.
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You are most welcome and I very much enjoyed it ! Again good luck and best wishes :)
Comment from Ricky1024
this is an I am not perfect writing prompt and many of the things that you posted that you have problems with I myself due to I love to gamble and spend too much I don't particularly love eating fast food but I do love to eat and I'm overweight and 30 lb but that's something that we all should work on I never tried pot have no intentions to cuz I never been high but I am high on life and love and the pursuit of happiness which sometimes I can't locate and find I'll have a wonderful day!
Well written.
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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this is an I am not perfect writing prompt and many of the things that you posted that you have problems with I myself due to I love to gamble and spend too much I don't particularly love eating fast food but I do love to eat and I'm overweight and 30 lb but that's something that we all should work on I never tried pot have no intentions to cuz I never been high but I am high on life and love and the pursuit of happiness which sometimes I can't locate and find I'll have a wonderful day!
Well written.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you for such a great review, I always appreciate it.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good story for the 'I Am Not Perfect' writing prompt.
A well rhymed and fun poem about impulse buying and overspending. Well done.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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This is a good story for the 'I Am Not Perfect' writing prompt.
A well rhymed and fun poem about impulse buying and overspending. Well done.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for reading my poem, I always appreciate it.
