Dear Aaron
The need is real when loving a musician.5 total reviews
Comment from karenina
There is an old song that has in its' lyrics "You've got it bad and that ain't good"....
(smile)---this illustration combined with your poem seems to diagnosis that you are "terminally smitten"...and loving anyone that much can "hurt so good!"----
MY mother used to say if I ever found I was "drowning in love" to start swimming fast in the other direction!
Karenia
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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There is an old song that has in its' lyrics "You've got it bad and that ain't good"....
(smile)---this illustration combined with your poem seems to diagnosis that you are "terminally smitten"...and loving anyone that much can "hurt so good!"----
MY mother used to say if I ever found I was "drowning in love" to start swimming fast in the other direction!
Karenia
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Oooh - "I got it bad (and that ain't good)" - love Nina Simone :D Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. It's my first attempt at a poem and entering any kind of writing contest! It's exciting to get feedback on it already :)
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Make sure you keep writing poems! YOU are a natural!
Karenina
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry writing prompt.
Your story of intense love is clear.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry writing prompt.
Your story of intense love is clear.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reviewing my poem! I am new to poetry writing and it's my first contest entry. Getting the great reviews makes me feel like a winner no matter the contest result :)
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well done. Keep up the good work and hope you enjoy the site.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, lovely poem, I like the way you tie the senses and music in with a loving tribute to a musician you love. Music is one of our greatest achievements, in mho. Nicely done, and the picture is very appropriate I'm surprised you found something to fit so well. Noticed no errors, thanks, Ana.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Hello, lovely poem, I like the way you tie the senses and music in with a loving tribute to a musician you love. Music is one of our greatest achievements, in mho. Nicely done, and the picture is very appropriate I'm surprised you found something to fit so well. Noticed no errors, thanks, Ana.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you for your review! I love how the reviews on this site are detailed and not simply "I liked it." It was my first poetry attempt and the reviews are so encouraging. I actually saw the picture awhile back and have kept looking at it. When I read about the contest it just seemed to be what I should try writing about! Worked out perfect :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
Well now, I think that I just read the winner of this contest. Your images are passionate and your musical theme is consistently carried out in each line. Words, chords, and voice. Then your whole body is involved--brain, heart, and soul. In order of importance in love no less. Expertly crafted.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Well now, I think that I just read the winner of this contest. Your images are passionate and your musical theme is consistently carried out in each line. Words, chords, and voice. Then your whole body is involved--brain, heart, and soul. In order of importance in love no less. Expertly crafted.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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I think I've been stunned since I read your review. It was my first attempt at poetry or any creative writing in many years, so I was not expecting such a positive and detailed response! Yours was the first I received and it's taken me this long to not be to "speechless" to respond LOL. I appreciate you taking the time to review my work and including specifics of what you liked. It has encouraged me to try writing more!
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I hope you are encouraged to write lots more. This cannot be a fluke.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your poem has deep seated emotion and a love for the music that soothes your soul and numbs the ache in your heart, I wish you luck with this expressive poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Your poem has deep seated emotion and a love for the music that soothes your soul and numbs the ache in your heart, I wish you luck with this expressive poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. It's my first attempt at a poem and entering any kind of writing contest! I appreciate the details of why you liked it. It helped encourage me to try writing more :)
