Comment from Teri7

Excellent

You used very cute words and I love the imagery you chose. It was fun to read and review. I did not see any spag or errors. You did a good job with this Pranka poem. You are good at that style! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

Thanks, Teri, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Yep Bill I'll say that the Casinos weren't the only thing that stayed open Lol!
Nice picture to drive your poems storyline to its peak.I love it. A little hint of humor but a big suggestion of:
Uh ooooooooooo! Great job Bill.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

Bunnies are not known for their chastity.

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

I loved the picture which went very well with the poem that was very well written with lots of imagery. I like the way the poet wrote this short poem. Good job.

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

Thanks, Harry

reply by Harry Smith on 17-Mar-2018

You are welcome.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the world of Shrew, in their world, mummy Bunny is now busy with her new baby; mom knows how shrewdly to pass her weekends in Vegas; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

Thanks again, ALD.