Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Serves him right for messin' with the fishes
Shoulda spent more time washin' up the dishes
Now he knows how it feels to have a beef
with jellyfish and their razor sharp teeth

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Now he?s hugging jamfish.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

A delightful limerickish ballad. A wonderful job of rhyming Aloysius who somehow managed to survive holding all those jellyfishes. I also like your use of dialect.

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thanks, Rod

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds like a Limerick style to me Bill, a fun write unless you get fatally stung! He can serenade the mermaids now he has survived, he he he, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thanks, Dolly