Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Funny Nonsense Poem writing prompt.
Your verse about nursery rhymes is fun.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Poem starts with a silly, familiar sound in "Chicka Chicka Boom Boom (from the song "chicka boom chicka boom) and the appearance of Jack Horner and Mother Hubbard and pals. Nice borrowing from familiar stories to create this new one.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for your review!

Comment from Vivien Lamond

Excellent

Haha loved it. Great use of all the classic nursery rhyme titles and their adventures. Great pacing and rhyming structure throughout makes it a pleasure to read.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks so Much!

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nice, a jumble mix of several favorite nursery rhymes thrown in a mix with some good humor added. Nicely done, good luck and have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

This is a perfect nonsense poem. Yes, it is lighthearted and silly. It's a nonsense poem after all. But it is well written as well. The rhymes are easy and flow well. It could have been entered in the children's poem category. Children would be laughing out loud at your diddle diddle patter.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Haha. Thanks so much. I really appreciate your fun review.

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Haha. Thanks so much. I really appreciate your fun review.

Comment from Beck Fenton

Excellent

Some of my favorite nursery rhymes brought to life. And the phrase diddle diddle patter is exquisite. Or British. I often confuse the two. Anyways, I enjoyed the visiting of some familiar characters.
Perfect for the prompt. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for the great review. I appreciate the comments and your encouragement. It was a fun one to write and I just made up the wording as I went. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Jumping low she misses, dish running with the spoon
Lighthearted nonsense and silly Nursery rhyme
Diddle diddle patter, I thank you for your time. '
A great entry for this fun competition I hope you do well with it very funny kindest regards Meia xx

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for the great review!!

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

This certainly fits perfectly into the contest description and I think you have a very strong entry here!
Loved the mixed-up mess of nursery rhyme characters. It made me smile, and I didn't find anything to suggest or correct.
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for your encouragement and review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

haha You did a good job with this nonsense poem contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Good job on the them that your examples follow. They are funny. One idea--a cow is a SHE. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Haha. Thanks so much. I?ll remember the Cow!!

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, lovely consistent rhyming in this nonsense poem, and it is for the competition, so best of luck with this entry. I noticed no errors, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Thank you. I appreciate your time and your lovely review.