Comment from damommy

Excellent

Ha-ha. Cute one. He wasn't so protected after all.

I like the double words - swish swish by and fish fish pie.

Perfect photo to go along with it.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Your review was delish-ish, da

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Very nice artwork that complements your poem perfectly. It is the second piece about jellyfish. I thought you already had quite a few. This one is extraordinary. Mainly by the general layout. It rhymes all the way.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, Ine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

That is some monster shark. What a big mouth it has, too. That's the law of the jungle in the ocean. Excellent rhyme in this, very catchy. Sounds like a bad ending for jellyfish and flounder. I'm not much of a seafood fan, so I could do without a fish pie. Very jaunty feel to this. judi

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 22-Mar-2018

You're welcome. This was cute. judi

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the fun of law of Nature and cycle of life, small is the food of large one and large of larger; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, ALD

Comment from apky

Excellent

What a lovely and humorous vignette, Bill.

If I were the jellyfish fish, I would tickle that wide palate until it spits me out again - hahahah... I wonder what Pons and Ned would make of this?

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

We may see, if I can get him through the play.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

hahaha, nice, with a good sense humor tho maybe a bit sick but good humor non the less. thanks for the share and have a good day

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, William

Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

What a neat poem!... Definitely different... I Like It!
Covered a Lot with those few words...
Don't see any problems...
My compliments... Well Done!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, WB

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Bill;
I'm not sure if I enjoy the poetry of pictures more. You have created an entirely new world for me with these vignettes of the undersea world. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, Patty

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Nicely said, matching your pictures.
His hiding place wasn't so safe after all.
Well written, well said.
Thank you for sharing another fun verse with us.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, Sharon, for the great review. Bill