Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Oh, this is a very cute poem you have penned. I can see why Uncle Joe got mad is someone shot his pretty birds. You used very good words and very nice imagery with the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Hmm. Let me guess, was this Ned? Good meter and rhyme except that's a pretty unconventional spelling but if it were Ned, I'd understand. I'm guessing he didn't do it again.

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

I've actually just changed the picture and wording to make the use of the misspelled word clearer.

reply by lyenochka on 07-Apr-2018

Like that better as that makes it a pun as well.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

You could have gone all day without telling me that. No wonder Uncle Joe was in a rage.

I know this is fictional, but there are people who would do that. 8-)

Good rhyme and meter.


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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

So you think this is fictional?

reply by damommy on 07-Apr-2018

Yes, I do. 8-)