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Comment from meeshu
nicely written and very clever, Bill. was this too late for the bird prompt?
you might have taken it. it's playful and fun.........meeshu
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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nicely written and very clever, Bill. was this too late for the bird prompt?
you might have taken it. it's playful and fun.........meeshu
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thanks, meeshu, for the excellent review. I didn't see it. Bill
Comment from Pamusart
BIRDS!!!!! YIKES!!!! Parakeets no less. I guess they could do some damage if they wanted to. Very well written and cute! Why are the aves raging. Who upset them? Maybe just for shock value. The ending, I mean. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for shsring
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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BIRDS!!!!! YIKES!!!! Parakeets no less. I guess they could do some damage if they wanted to. Very well written and cute! Why are the aves raging. Who upset them? Maybe just for shock value. The ending, I mean. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for shsring
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Pamusart, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of alliteration effects parakeets pecking away at a cracker or even some fiddle faddle. I like your ending. It snacks of tongue-in-cheek humor. While parakeets are usually delightful, something stirs within as within so many of us. I prefer to read poetry aloud, it is the only way to read it. I enjoyed the sounds in yours. You have some tongue-twisters for the reader who also enjoy that sport. Well written
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Your use of alliteration effects parakeets pecking away at a cracker or even some fiddle faddle. I like your ending. It snacks of tongue-in-cheek humor. While parakeets are usually delightful, something stirs within as within so many of us. I prefer to read poetry aloud, it is the only way to read it. I enjoyed the sounds in yours. You have some tongue-twisters for the reader who also enjoy that sport. Well written
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Liz, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the parakeets from the market place to home, they are now singing in unison at home, so innocent about change in place of living and state of survival; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks about the parakeets from the market place to home, they are now singing in unison at home, so innocent about change in place of living and state of survival; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thanks, ALD, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Katya
Nice sound, nice poem, nice picture. I had a parakeet when I was a child. He sang "Skip to Ma Lou." Well, he would recite the words, but he couldn't carry a tune. He recognized the tune, though, and would hop wildly around when my sister played it on the piano.
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Nice sound, nice poem, nice picture. I had a parakeet when I was a child. He sang "Skip to Ma Lou." Well, he would recite the words, but he couldn't carry a tune. He recognized the tune, though, and would hop wildly around when my sister played it on the piano.
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Katya, for the excellent review. I had a frog who sang Ragtime Gal. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
Aves is Latin for birds but why are the birds angry? And how do they sing in such lovely quartets while being so disgruntled? My favorite line in this was:
"to a humble, huddled prattle;"
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Aves is Latin for birds but why are the birds angry? And how do they sing in such lovely quartets while being so disgruntled? My favorite line in this was:
"to a humble, huddled prattle;"
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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If I knew why birds were angry I'd write a book and become a hundredaire.
