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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from royowen
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I wonder if it's a competition between the humble cockroach or the worm, Bill, I like your sense of humour, I was watching a film tonight, on a chemical stack, people all stressed an living in a shelter, while outside...the roaches and the worms played, excellent job with this well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
    Thanks, Roy
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks worm world does not end , the conqueror worm to reign over the world with his friends, apparently there is no end; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
    Thanks, ALD
Comment from Harry Smith
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Bill the picture selection is just outstanding and the poem is outstanding as well it is written with lots and lots of imagery. I really like the picture selection.

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018


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    Thanks, Harry
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is very scary! A frightening picture and even more frightening words! The last line sent a shiver down my spine! Worms, yuk! A Great write, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018


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    Thanks, Dolly