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Comment from Bill Schott
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This twenty-syllable poem, A Windy Day, reminds me of those joyous few days of flying kites each year as a kid. They were good for a couple flights, then -- the tree.

 Comment Written 05-May-2018

reply by the author on 09-May-2018
    Thank you for your review.I appreciate it, yep the trees. Lost a few kites myself to them. I hope you have a great day.
Comment from Miriam Collins
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I love this sweet little poem! Wonderful job creating a story in so few words. I love the picture you chose to go with it as well. I was able to imagine the whole scene taking place. Great job!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 09-May-2018
    Sorry it took me so long to say thank you for you review.Thank you I do appreciate it.
Comment from William Ross
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Great 20 syllable for a windy day, I used to get out with my father, I remember those days. Good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Thank youthank you
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is a great verse and so appropriate to our season. it's very windy here in Richmond, VA too and I've seen a lot of kites. Hope you and your grandkids had a good time.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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    Thank you
Comment from Katya
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Clear and compact 20 syllable poem, with a cheerful fun image and a very pleasant sound. It has a nice picture to help it along too. Altogether a nice, breezy job. Thank you!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    THANK YOU
Comment from LIJ Red
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Yep, one man's gale is another's kite weather. I always enjoy these proud grandpop pieces. Looks like this one is also an appropriate twenty syllable poem.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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    Thank you
Comment from meeshu
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your grandchildren are very logical and industrious. I can imagine them making lemonade in the midst of a lemon boon. a sweet little poem, well done.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Thank you
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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This is a darling little poem in only twenty syllables, my friend.
It's always fun to go fly a kite. Enjoy your day! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Thank youThank you
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 26-Apr-2018
    You're welcome!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of kite flying on a windy day.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Thank you