Close Call
A Tyburn entry6 total reviews
Comment from angel123
This poem type was no challenge for you to write. It flows and rhymes well and tells a complete story. I like your subject and artwork and I enjoyed reading your poem. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This poem type was no challenge for you to write. It flows and rhymes well and tells a complete story. I like your subject and artwork and I enjoyed reading your poem. Best wishes!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Appreciate very. much your taking the time to review and offer insights.
Comment from Ginnygray
What a clever story shared within this Tyborn poem and fulfilling all of the poem's requirements of rhyming and syllables. Great choice of art work and expressive words that added a thrill of relief for the seagull!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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What a clever story shared within this Tyborn poem and fulfilling all of the poem's requirements of rhyming and syllables. Great choice of art work and expressive words that added a thrill of relief for the seagull!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Appreciate very. much your taking the time to review and offer insights.
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Sorry about the misspelling of Tyburn!
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Sorry about the Tyburn misspell!
Comment from Miriam Collins
This is a very engaging poem! I love the words you chose, they make the poem move a long in a very exciting way. Its interesting, sometimes you don't think of how dangerous waves can be to birds since they can fly, but I just watched last night on Nat Geo a dove who got caught in a wave, so just because they have wings doesn't always mean they can survive from such dangerous waters. Great job in creating a very effective Tyburn!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This is a very engaging poem! I love the words you chose, they make the poem move a long in a very exciting way. Its interesting, sometimes you don't think of how dangerous waves can be to birds since they can fly, but I just watched last night on Nat Geo a dove who got caught in a wave, so just because they have wings doesn't always mean they can survive from such dangerous waters. Great job in creating a very effective Tyburn!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Appreciate very. much your taking the time to review and offer insights.
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a great job developing this entry for the Tyburn Poetry prompt. I like the ocean theme and thought your artwork enhanced your verse. Good luck on this!!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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You did a great job developing this entry for the Tyburn Poetry prompt. I like the ocean theme and thought your artwork enhanced your verse. Good luck on this!!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Appreciate very much your taking the time to review and offer insights.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
I am so impressed by your Tyburn poem. It is filled with description and its format is "spot on." I have attempted one of these so many times that I have lost count; yours is splendid! Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Hello Mystery Writer!
I am so impressed by your Tyburn poem. It is filled with description and its format is "spot on." I have attempted one of these so many times that I have lost count; yours is splendid! Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Appreciate very much your taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Tyburn Poetry writing prompt.
Your verse tells of the seagull avoiding crashing waves while following the Tyburn structure.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Tyburn Poetry writing prompt.
Your verse tells of the seagull avoiding crashing waves while following the Tyburn structure.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Appreciate very much your taking the time to review and offer insights.
