Smiles after tears
We all pray for our children's happiness11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-three-two poem, Smiles After Tears, has the right set up and names that extra joy we all feel when our kids are happy, safe, and all smiles. Nice.
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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This two-three-two poem, Smiles After Tears, has the right set up and names that extra joy we all feel when our kids are happy, safe, and all smiles. Nice.
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Thano you so much Bill
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Very beautiful little girl and such a precious smile on her face. Is very rewarding her little innocent no motives no tricks no games just an innocent little smile. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Very beautiful little girl and such a precious smile on her face. Is very rewarding her little innocent no motives no tricks no games just an innocent little smile. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Many thanks for your review
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My pleasure
Comment from Ginnygray
This is a great expression of love and wish for all of our children and grandchildren. Your message is concise and full of truth. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This is a great expression of love and wish for all of our children and grandchildren. Your message is concise and full of truth. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Many tnanks for your comments.
Comment from William Ross
Very good I know my Childs smile fills my heart with joy, nicely done great job and good entry. good luck and have a great day.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Very good I know my Childs smile fills my heart with joy, nicely done great job and good entry. good luck and have a great day.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Many thanks for reviewing
Comment from Harry Smith
This is a powerful 2-3-2 poem with an exceptional picture that fits perfectly with the poem. Good contest entry. The reader enjoyed.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This is a powerful 2-3-2 poem with an exceptional picture that fits perfectly with the poem. Good contest entry. The reader enjoyed.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Many thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Henry King
What parent can not feel the intent of this poem. To this one, and a reader, it goes right to my core. That is one of the prime attributes a parent must have, pride in his children's joy and outlook on life. Your short poem and very descriptive picture say it all and nothing has to be added. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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What parent can not feel the intent of this poem. To this one, and a reader, it goes right to my core. That is one of the prime attributes a parent must have, pride in his children's joy and outlook on life. Your short poem and very descriptive picture say it all and nothing has to be added. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your great review
Comment from Artasylum
Nothing sweeter than a face like that. This is a great entry for the contest and I wish you great good luck with your sweet, heartwarming poem. Thanks so much. yours, diana
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Nothing sweeter than a face like that. This is a great entry for the contest and I wish you great good luck with your sweet, heartwarming poem. Thanks so much. yours, diana
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Many thanks Diana
Comment from RodG
This 2-3-2 vividly states how most parents define "Joy." I know this is what it is to me, even now as a grandparent. So much conveyed in only six words.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This 2-3-2 vividly states how most parents define "Joy." I know this is what it is to me, even now as a grandparent. So much conveyed in only six words.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Many thanks for reviewing
Comment from Liz O'Neill
What a lovely poem and the magnanimous imagery it awakens. The reader even without child will be drawn in. Even if it is the smile they see on the face of a facebook friend's child. They will share in your joy. The reader will remember, yes I was smiling while savoring the glowing countenance of that child. this reminder may help the reader feel happiness anew. Thank you. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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What a lovely poem and the magnanimous imagery it awakens. The reader even without child will be drawn in. Even if it is the smile they see on the face of a facebook friend's child. They will share in your joy. The reader will remember, yes I was smiling while savoring the glowing countenance of that child. this reminder may help the reader feel happiness anew. Thank you. Well expressed.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for ylur great review
Comment from apky
You hit that one truly on head.
A child's smile is glorious, and when that child happens to bve your own adored and cherished one, then the smile just breaks your hearl in a million sweet ways.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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You hit that one truly on head.
A child's smile is glorious, and when that child happens to bve your own adored and cherished one, then the smile just breaks your hearl in a million sweet ways.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for your great review
