Summertime Decadence
5/7/5 Summer: Tied for 2nd Place12 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the refreshing fruits we can enjoy during summertime. We have very hot summers and that is one of my favorite treats to cool down from the inside is cooled juicy fruit.
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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A very well-written poem about the refreshing fruits we can enjoy during summertime. We have very hot summers and that is one of my favorite treats to cool down from the inside is cooled juicy fruit.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hello Sandra,
Bring on the strawberry shortcake!
Thank you for your excellent rating and review!
diane
Comment from victor 66
There are so many fruits to look forward to in the summer, especially strawberries. My wife likes to pick wild blueberries and raspberries. Fortunately, she's willing to share them. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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There are so many fruits to look forward to in the summer, especially strawberries. My wife likes to pick wild blueberries and raspberries. Fortunately, she's willing to share them. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you, victor!
So looking forward to strawberry shortcake!
Thank you for your excellent rating and review!
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It is the little things that make life so worthwhile. You are most welcome, Mrs. KT.
Comment from Miriam Collins
I love your sweet little poem! It reminds me of strawberry picking summer days. I love the taste sensory details you give. And the ending, "Summer's sweet delight" is just perfect.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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I love your sweet little poem! It reminds me of strawberry picking summer days. I love the taste sensory details you give. And the ending, "Summer's sweet delight" is just perfect.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hello Kelsey!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the one 5-7-5 Summer writing prompt.
Your short verse tells clearly of summer and strawberries.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the one 5-7-5 Summer writing prompt.
Your short verse tells clearly of summer and strawberries.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hello Sharon!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
Comment from meeshu
decadence---one of my favorites things. this is great Haiku. it should do well in the summertime prompt contest, I wish you good luck and good times.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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decadence---one of my favorites things. this is great Haiku. it should do well in the summertime prompt contest, I wish you good luck and good times.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hello meeshu!
Hah!
Thank you for your excellent rating and wonderful review!
Comment from emptypage
God, I love ripe, beautiful strawberries. They are truly a sign that summer has arrived. I like strawberries in spring, too, but they are never quite ripe, are they.
Nice poem. Good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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God, I love ripe, beautiful strawberries. They are truly a sign that summer has arrived. I like strawberries in spring, too, but they are never quite ripe, are they.
Nice poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hello Friend,
Thank you for your excellent rating and review!
I am so ready for strawberry season!
Comment from karenina
Order up! I would love acquart please! Preferably fresh ftom the field, still plump, juicy and warmed by he swee kiss of the sun.
My! A poem that has nduced a craving! :)
Karenina
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Order up! I would love acquart please! Preferably fresh ftom the field, still plump, juicy and warmed by he swee kiss of the sun.
My! A poem that has nduced a craving! :)
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
Comment from Almahar826
There are many joys to summer, and one of the biggest are seeing the beautiful plants and tree growing so beautifully. Love the picture you chose to go along with your work on this poem. All the best!
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There are many joys to summer, and one of the biggest are seeing the beautiful plants and tree growing so beautifully. Love the picture you chose to go along with your work on this poem. All the best!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
Comment from Artasylum
I instantly felt the need to have strawberries, grapes, blueberries. I could keep on going but this was a good image supporting the poem. thanks so much and looking forward. yours, diana
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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I instantly felt the need to have strawberries, grapes, blueberries. I could keep on going but this was a good image supporting the poem. thanks so much and looking forward. yours, diana
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello diana,
The moment I read the prompt, all I could think of was strawberries!
Thank you for your excellent rating and review!
Here's to summertime strawberries!
Comment from rspoet
An excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
that makes me want to get some strawberries
Good use of alliteration and imagery
Best wishes in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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An excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
that makes me want to get some strawberries
Good use of alliteration and imagery
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello RS!
When I read the prompt, the very first thought that came to my mind was strawberries!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
