Summertime Decadence
5/7/5 Summer: Tied for 2nd Place12 total reviews
Comment from Harry Smith
This is an outstanding poem for the 5-7-5 writing contest. It is full of imagery and the reader really like the way the author wrote this poem.
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This is an outstanding poem for the 5-7-5 writing contest. It is full of imagery and the reader really like the way the author wrote this poem.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
Comment from RodG
Strawberries are definitely quintessential summer. Your poem makes my mouth water.
Good use of R and S-alliteration in lines 1 & 3.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Strawberries are definitely quintessential summer. Your poem makes my mouth water.
Good use of R and S-alliteration in lines 1 & 3.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello Rod!
Strawberry Shortcake... yes?
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
