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Comment from Poetic Friend
Bill,
I think this is one of your best. You chose the perfect insect to write about relative to changes. You could use the chameleon as an extended metaphor and write extensively on this the subject of change.
Good word choice, my friend. Bravo!
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Bill,
I think this is one of your best. You chose the perfect insect to write about relative to changes. You could use the chameleon as an extended metaphor and write extensively on this the subject of change.
Good word choice, my friend. Bravo!
Comment Written 02-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Thanks, PF
Comment from frogbook
What a wise and clever chameleon you have here. Very well put together and fits perfectly into the ways of these little guys and their adaptability.
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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What a wise and clever chameleon you have here. Very well put together and fits perfectly into the ways of these little guys and their adaptability.
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Thanks, FB
Comment from judiverse
This makes me think how politicians must be chameleons. They are capable of changing whenever the need arises. They're always "In the moment," thinking of those approval ratings. Chameleons have those survival skills. judi
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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This makes me think how politicians must be chameleons. They are capable of changing whenever the need arises. They're always "In the moment," thinking of those approval ratings. Chameleons have those survival skills. judi
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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...and the general lizard thing.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well worded 5-7-5 about what the chameleon is saying. You used very good descriptive words which made for good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This is a very cute and well worded 5-7-5 about what the chameleon is saying. You used very good descriptive words which made for good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from nomi338
One of my favorite recordings is by Aretha Franklin and Michael McDonald. The songs title is "These are ever changing times" and I figure that has to be a mantra for the chameleon, as for him, every moment is an ever changing time.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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One of my favorite recordings is by Aretha Franklin and Michael McDonald. The songs title is "These are ever changing times" and I figure that has to be a mantra for the chameleon, as for him, every moment is an ever changing time.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Comment from Ginnygray
You've created a great piece of advice here in very few words. "To be in the moment " is a very good satori for this 5-7-5 poem. The structure is sound with all the necessary syllables present.
"Change is a must", is true for this little lizard and connects nicely to line one. The personification is present and in the moment! A good one, Bill.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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You've created a great piece of advice here in very few words. "To be in the moment " is a very good satori for this 5-7-5 poem. The structure is sound with all the necessary syllables present.
"Change is a must", is true for this little lizard and connects nicely to line one. The personification is present and in the moment! A good one, Bill.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Ginny
Comment from damommy
The chameleon is wise. We should listen to him. Change is inevitable whether he like it or not. We must go with the times as long as it's the right thing to do.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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The chameleon is wise. We should listen to him. Change is inevitable whether he like it or not. We must go with the times as long as it's the right thing to do.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thanks, da
Comment from Harry Smith
A very powerful poem that should do good in the 5-7-5 contest. Very power with lots and lots of imagery and emotions as well.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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A very powerful poem that should do good in the 5-7-5 contest. Very power with lots and lots of imagery and emotions as well.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Harry
Comment from William Ross
yes for these guys change is a must to survive. great job on the 5,7,5 on the chameleon. Thanks for the share and have a great day
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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yes for these guys change is a must to survive. great job on the 5,7,5 on the chameleon. Thanks for the share and have a great day
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thanks, William
