Soul Mates
A Diatelle8 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Such a beautiful Diatelle poetic offering! Although you must follow the required syllabic count and rhyme pattern, your words flow with ease. Furthermore, in spite of the fact that your poem is of romance, it is not contrived. I usually cringe when I read most love poems as they are filled with cliches; your is not.
This poetic form is incredibly challenging to pen, and yours is wonderful!
Thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Such a beautiful Diatelle poetic offering! Although you must follow the required syllabic count and rhyme pattern, your words flow with ease. Furthermore, in spite of the fact that your poem is of romance, it is not contrived. I usually cringe when I read most love poems as they are filled with cliches; your is not.
This poetic form is incredibly challenging to pen, and yours is wonderful!
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for your positive insights and generous rating!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Share a Diatelle Poem writing prompt.
Your verse is well structured and tells a good story.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Share a Diatelle Poem writing prompt.
Your verse is well structured and tells a good story.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Appreciate the positive feedback, Sharon.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how poet has shared their dreams as soul mates, how they had bonding of two lost souls through healing and how discovered heaven's glories; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This speaks how poet has shared their dreams as soul mates, how they had bonding of two lost souls through healing and how discovered heaven's glories; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to drop in and review my diatelle! It was a bit of a challenge, but I enjoyed it.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written diatelle poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good words and lovely art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This is a very interesting and well written diatelle poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good words and lovely art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to drop in and review my diatelle! It was a bit of a challenge, but I enjoyed it.
Comment from karenina
It is a delicious little form isn't it? It shapes so well center aligned...it lends itself to so many themes and moods...you've captured it and enabled it to flow smoothly line to line without the reader giving a thought to count until it's time to review...and then back I go to count...and of course, it is perfect!
Good luck in the contest!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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It is a delicious little form isn't it? It shapes so well center aligned...it lends itself to so many themes and moods...you've captured it and enabled it to flow smoothly line to line without the reader giving a thought to count until it's time to review...and then back I go to count...and of course, it is perfect!
Good luck in the contest!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to drop in and review my diatelle! It was a bit of a challenge, but I enjoyed it.
Comment from Harry Smith
This poem should do good in the contest. The picture selection is outstanding for this poem that has lots and lots of imagery and the reader enjoyed.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This poem should do good in the contest. The picture selection is outstanding for this poem that has lots and lots of imagery and the reader enjoyed.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to drop in and review my diatelle! It was a bit of a challenge, but I enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written entry in this diatelle poetry contes my friend, the shape is quite good, the theme is excellent, the rhyming is spot on and the articulate presentation is a good one, Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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A beautifully written entry in this diatelle poetry contes my friend, the shape is quite good, the theme is excellent, the rhyming is spot on and the articulate presentation is a good one, Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to drop in and review my diatelle! It was a bit of a challenge, but I enjoyed it.
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Well done, good job.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, a great poem for the 'Diatelle Poem' competition and best of luck with this well written entry. I saw no errors, just lovey writing with a beautiful sentiment. I think this poem will have broad appeal and thanks for sharing it, Ana.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Hello, a great poem for the 'Diatelle Poem' competition and best of luck with this well written entry. I saw no errors, just lovey writing with a beautiful sentiment. I think this poem will have broad appeal and thanks for sharing it, Ana.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to drop in and review my diatelle! It was a bit of a challenge, but I enjoyed it.
