Lakeside
Pleiades: Life by the lake22 total reviews
Comment from ameen786
A beautiful poem in lovely verses that's so vividly descriptive with nice alliteration; I thank you for sharing and congratulations for the well deserving win.
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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A beautiful poem in lovely verses that's so vividly descriptive with nice alliteration; I thank you for sharing and congratulations for the well deserving win.
Comment Written 03-May-2018
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Hello ameen,
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
I so enjoyed penning this piece.
diane
Comment from nancyjam
Congratulations on your win. I loved your beautifully
descriptive lines which brought lovely memories of
summers by a lake in Washington.
Good use of alliteration and wonderful images to bring the reader "lakeside"
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Congratulations on your win. I loved your beautifully
descriptive lines which brought lovely memories of
summers by a lake in Washington.
Good use of alliteration and wonderful images to bring the reader "lakeside"
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
Comment Written 03-May-2018
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Hello Nancy!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
I have the good fortune to live lakeside in Traverse City, Michigan = just beautiful!
So pleased you enjoyed!
diane
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations on your worthy win in this contest, I must have missed this write! A clever an sentimental write with great descriptions and feel good factor, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Congratulations on your worthy win in this contest, I must have missed this write! A clever an sentimental write with great descriptions and feel good factor, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-May-2018
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Hello, My Friend!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
Lakeside in northern Michigan is beautiful...
Take Care,
diane
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Pleiades poem about the wonderful times at the Lakeside. Where the children swim in the water from dawn to dusk and sitting at the campfire till it's time for bed.
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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A very well-written Pleiades poem about the wonderful times at the Lakeside. Where the children swim in the water from dawn to dusk and sitting at the campfire till it's time for bed.
Comment Written 02-May-2018
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Hello Sandra,
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
diane
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is such a beautiful Pleiades poem you've penned, my friend. "Long fish tales/ sugar sand shores" outstanding! love it all! Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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This is such a beautiful Pleiades poem you've penned, my friend. "Long fish tales/ sugar sand shores" outstanding! love it all! Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 02-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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HI Kerry!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
diane
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Air Spirit
I love your poem... so vivid, detailed, descriptive and appreciative of mother nature in all of her wonder at the lake and/or in nature... I love camping - always have -- because when I am outdoors, I usually feel an instant connection to God and through God, to others and to life in general.. Reading your poem, I could taste the fish we caught, feel the flames of the fire, and be in awe watching the glorious heavens, the stars, including one of my favorite constellations "Pleiades, or the Seven Sisters" is one of my favorite..
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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I love your poem... so vivid, detailed, descriptive and appreciative of mother nature in all of her wonder at the lake and/or in nature... I love camping - always have -- because when I am outdoors, I usually feel an instant connection to God and through God, to others and to life in general.. Reading your poem, I could taste the fish we caught, feel the flames of the fire, and be in awe watching the glorious heavens, the stars, including one of my favorite constellations "Pleiades, or the Seven Sisters" is one of my favorite..
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Hello Air Spirit!
So very pleased that my poem resonates with you.
Thank you ever so much for your excellent rating and thoughtful and heartfelt review!
Comment from happykat4
Excellent poem. I can hear the children in play, the calling of the loons, the smell of onions and fish cooking on the open fire, and my mouth waters for the morel mushrooms. I long to be out there with the fresh air and the peacefulness among the stars and the pines. Life slows down and we enjoy every minute. It will pull at my heart strings calling me back. All rules of writing prompt followed and my dear poet, it was exquisite. Thank you. Kat
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Excellent poem. I can hear the children in play, the calling of the loons, the smell of onions and fish cooking on the open fire, and my mouth waters for the morel mushrooms. I long to be out there with the fresh air and the peacefulness among the stars and the pines. Life slows down and we enjoy every minute. It will pull at my heart strings calling me back. All rules of writing prompt followed and my dear poet, it was exquisite. Thank you. Kat
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Oh my goodness, Kat!
Thank you ever so much for your exceptional rating and thoughtful, heartfelt review!
I truly didn't expect my words to resonate with very many people...But this is where I live, and I am so blessed to embrace and share it with others...
Thank you again!
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you are welcome. Kat :)
Comment from poetwatch
So smooth your lines sail I feel the pull, the allure of your world. The words flow from your pen in an artistic manner that I must learn your style. I feel myself enchanted by the vision of your painting. This is a good entry for the Pieiades Contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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So smooth your lines sail I feel the pull, the allure of your world. The words flow from your pen in an artistic manner that I must learn your style. I feel myself enchanted by the vision of your painting. This is a good entry for the Pieiades Contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hello Friend,
What an unexpected and lovely surprise!
Thank you for your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
I am truly honored...
Comment from victor 66
This is my home in Northern Minnesota, thirty miles up the Gunflint Trail out of a little town called Grand Marais. Lake Superior is next to Grand Marais which only adds to the magic. Everything you mentioned in your Pleiades poem, I have, every summer. Very nice read.
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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This is my home in Northern Minnesota, thirty miles up the Gunflint Trail out of a little town called Grand Marais. Lake Superior is next to Grand Marais which only adds to the magic. Everything you mentioned in your Pleiades poem, I have, every summer. Very nice read.
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hello victor 66!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
I, too, live in a northern town, between two glorious bays that we can see from our home high on a bluff.
So very lucky we are...
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Yeah, everyday I roll the dice and they always seem to come up "7". you are most welcome. Mrs. KT
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a beautiful Pleiades Poetry entry that you have written. I like the serenity you evoke with your descriptions of the Lake in Summerrtime. Well done on this verse.
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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This is a beautiful Pleiades Poetry entry that you have written. I like the serenity you evoke with your descriptions of the Lake in Summerrtime. Well done on this verse.
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hello Sugarray!
So pleased you enjoyed.
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review...
