Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Free-style poem: human suffering writing prompt.
A story well told within your verse.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written free verse poem about human suffering. We all have something that we find difficult to deal with. It is part of our suffering on earht that we learn to live with at the end.

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

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Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Prefect picture selection for this free style poem that is filled with lots of imagery and filled with emotions and is exceptionally well written.

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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Comment from meeshu

Excellent

an excellent free-thought, free-style, free-verse poem. well formed quintrains and well thought out message. good luck in the contest (prompt).

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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Comment from Phillip C Kuhn

Good

I can see what demographic would enjoy such a piece, but with that said not everyone will relate to this, it's good to write of who and what you are and not care what others think, but with the subject matter just know not everyone will relate and almost no agreement can be found on it.

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sentimental and faithful write with a kind of innocence within the well chosen words. I liked your free-style write and wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks humans and angels suffer the same manner; God knows how angels break, He makes no difference between human or His Own Angels, His fair judgement may forgive before Human enters Heaven's Gate; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

I like this very much! Your tone Win this piece pleases me such as:
I reckon this is God, Almighty, in Heaven.
Simple, straight forward and easily read. Yours, diana

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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Comment from apky

Excellent

It is a lovely free style poem to read. Human suffering come to us from the earliest moment possible and stay with us to the end.

It's comforting to know, though:

He makes no difference between
human or His Own angels.
If angels break they need
to be mended as well.
God must know better
than anybody how angels break.

Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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Comment from William Ross

Excellent

A great free style for the contest, I myself don't believe anyone has made it to the lords side yet, not till he returns then he will rise up all his believers dead and alive it says in revelations. good luck on this and have a great day.

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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reply by the author on 01-May-2018

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