Quality Time With Mom
Knitting not for me4 total reviews
Comment from JC Shurburtt
So after all that, knitting wasn't for you, eh? The ending of the poem was delightful. I like the way it flows and rhymes. I could see the three-sleeve doll dress in my mind. Very nice work.
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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So after all that, knitting wasn't for you, eh? The ending of the poem was delightful. I like the way it flows and rhymes. I could see the three-sleeve doll dress in my mind. Very nice work.
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Thank you for your review...I'm curious though. Can you tell me why my poem rated a good instead of a higher rating? I just like to learn about how my work is interpreted. Thanks again.
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I am new here and just learning the grading scale, so I am not really sure how liberal we should be? Maybe you can fill me in?
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I'm fairly new myself having only really been on fanstory for a year. I think ratings are a matter of opinion as they should be, but I usually give out a good rating when there is a grammatical error, just as a way of helping out. I appreciate all reviews I get and I thank you again for taking time to read my work. i look forward to reading more of yours.
Comment from Ginnygray
Great poem about Mom and daughter time together. Cookies always seemed to burn and you did at least knit with your Mom, making a sweet doll sweater. The only problem is you put three sleeves in the sweater instead of two! However, the most important thing to remember is how special the time was together!
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Great poem about Mom and daughter time together. Cookies always seemed to burn and you did at least knit with your Mom, making a sweet doll sweater. The only problem is you put three sleeves in the sweater instead of two! However, the most important thing to remember is how special the time was together!
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Thank you for this very nice review. I loved being with my mom, listening to her classical music, reading with her or just listening to her sing...She was very special. Thanks again for taking time to read and review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how meticulous childhood days have been, mom was busy teaching math and science the boring subjects, knitting or cookies making, crochet using, enjoying days; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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This speaks how meticulous childhood days have been, mom was busy teaching math and science the boring subjects, knitting or cookies making, crochet using, enjoying days; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Henry King
What an excellent poem in verse with both end and internal rhyme that made it sparkle like a little girls happy eyes. Spending time with mom and making her proud of you. The knitting was a chore but it sure wasn't a bore because you'll remember it and write about it at least once, but I bet more. Well done.
In the fifth line you misspelled "magic."
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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What an excellent poem in verse with both end and internal rhyme that made it sparkle like a little girls happy eyes. Spending time with mom and making her proud of you. The knitting was a chore but it sure wasn't a bore because you'll remember it and write about it at least once, but I bet more. Well done.
In the fifth line you misspelled "magic."
Comment Written 08-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Thank you for this nice review, I really appreciate it.
