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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Super job with this one. I guess this is my new favorite. Image is great.
Favorite lines:
"Photo bombed by a sea dollar
local authorities say
starfish were present as well"
Marilyn

 Comment Written 13-May-2018


reply by the author on 14-May-2018
    Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute poem about the Sponge world in the sea. You used very good descriptive words and I love the art work picture you used to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 12-May-2018


reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    Thanks,Teri
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Liked how you wrote this like a regular newsflash. Great use of alliteration of s-sounding, l-starting words also the fees/fines. Can sand dollars "see?"

 Comment Written 12-May-2018


reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    CAN sand dollars see? I do not know.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your imagination is beyond belief! You are so inventive with these write which has to be admired, another sponge write in the bag here, delightful, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-May-2018


reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from nomi338
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Those darn lawyers will find a way to make a dollar, anywhere, anyway, anytime. Question: What do you call a hundred lawyers at the bottom of the sea? A good idea. I don't happen to agree, but it is how many view and think of lawyers.

 Comment Written 12-May-2018


reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    They are replacing lab rats with lawyers for testing purposes. The lab workers don?t get as attached to them and there are some things even a rat won?t do.
reply by nomi338 on 13-May-2018
    Ouch! LOL.
Comment from judiverse
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Jolly good fun! The way you work in the sand dollars is great. Here's hoping the sea cents spent on fees and fines went to repair the damage done by undermining the photo shoot at the sponge convention. Love the idea of a sponge convention. They must have soaked up a lot of information there. Nice alliteration--sea cents and fees and fines. judi

 Comment Written 12-May-2018


reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    Thanks, Judi. When I saw this shot I immediately imagined the sand dollar jumping into it.
reply by judiverse on 12-May-2018
    You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Kathy Franklin
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This is really a fun poem to read. The wit and imagery of a sea sponge convention is a chuckle-buckler. You've quite the imagination, compete with sea lawyers. Love it!

 Comment Written 12-May-2018


reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    Thanks, Kathy
Comment from Henry King
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This is an excellent humorous explanation of a photograph. The internal rhyme extends the salty seascape. But, why are the poor dollars footing the bill? The boxed soaps with scents are center stage and much more wealthy than the skeletal sea dollars. Well done.

 Comment Written 12-May-2018


reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    Thanks, Henry. Soaps were the sponsors. : )
reply by Henry King on 12-May-2018
    I remember the ads. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL!! That is so funny, Bill! How do you come up with all these poems to go with these pics? They are really good, and so much fun. I loved this one! :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 12-May-2018


reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    Thanks, Sandra
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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How many sea dollars does it take to keep a sea lawyer on retainer?
As usual, you've created an entertaining piece of prose using a picture I'll never know why is out on the internet. Seriously, why are these out there?!
Doesn't matter; I love the pranka!

 Comment Written 12-May-2018


reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    Thanks, Brenda. I think someone wants to sell sponges down by the sea shore.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 17-May-2018
    You're welcome, Bill, and probably right. :)