Before It's Too Late
So much regret11 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Sad and touching poem. Nothing hurts more than regret, especially when you are too hard on someone you love. I hope this is fiction, but for many of us, it's real. Why are we so stubborn and unforgiving of each other? We think we're winning, but we can only lose in the end. You got your message through very well.
She depended on my daughters and I, <-- Should be ME, not _I_. Here is why.
Remove the OTHER person and read it: She depended on I. Does that sound right? No, therefore when you add another person, it is still wrong. Try again: She depended on ME. Does it sound right now? Yes, so it will be correct with another person added, like this:
She depended on my daughters and me.
You also wrote this at the very bottom: "Above is a picture of my sister and I." Remove "my sister" and hear how it sounds: "Above is a picture of I." Does that sound right? No, so try "me" instead: "Above is a picture of me." Yes! That's right, so when you add the other person, it will still be right: "Above is a picture of my sister and me." Easy, isn't it? You just have to remember to TEST the sentence by removing the second person.
This trick works every time, so always use it, and you will not make this all-too-common mistake. Here is a quiz to help it stick in your mind. Choose the right one:
1. Dad loaned the car to George and I.
2. Dad loaned the car to George and me. (Hint: Remove George.)
1. Sally and I stayed late at school.
2. Sally and me stayed late at school. (Careful, this one is different, but removing Sally still works!)
1. Mom made pancakes for him and I.
2. Mom made pancakes for him and me.
1. My brother and I go to the same school.
2. My brother and me go to the same school.
1. She wrote a story about Jan and me.
2. She wrote a story about Jan and I.
Answers: 2, 1, 2, 1, 1
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Sad and touching poem. Nothing hurts more than regret, especially when you are too hard on someone you love. I hope this is fiction, but for many of us, it's real. Why are we so stubborn and unforgiving of each other? We think we're winning, but we can only lose in the end. You got your message through very well.
She depended on my daughters and I, <-- Should be ME, not _I_. Here is why.
Remove the OTHER person and read it: She depended on I. Does that sound right? No, therefore when you add another person, it is still wrong. Try again: She depended on ME. Does it sound right now? Yes, so it will be correct with another person added, like this:
She depended on my daughters and me.
You also wrote this at the very bottom: "Above is a picture of my sister and I." Remove "my sister" and hear how it sounds: "Above is a picture of I." Does that sound right? No, so try "me" instead: "Above is a picture of me." Yes! That's right, so when you add the other person, it will still be right: "Above is a picture of my sister and me." Easy, isn't it? You just have to remember to TEST the sentence by removing the second person.
This trick works every time, so always use it, and you will not make this all-too-common mistake. Here is a quiz to help it stick in your mind. Choose the right one:
1. Dad loaned the car to George and I.
2. Dad loaned the car to George and me. (Hint: Remove George.)
1. Sally and I stayed late at school.
2. Sally and me stayed late at school. (Careful, this one is different, but removing Sally still works!)
1. Mom made pancakes for him and I.
2. Mom made pancakes for him and me.
1. My brother and I go to the same school.
2. My brother and me go to the same school.
1. She wrote a story about Jan and me.
2. She wrote a story about Jan and I.
Answers: 2, 1, 2, 1, 1
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your help! I will admit that punctuation, grammar Etc were not my strongest subjects. I welcome any help I can get and your examples really helped. I appreciate you taking time to read and review. :)
Comment from JDRBAR
This was hard for me to read. My sister, ten years younger than I, destroyed my life with her lies and deceit. I could have written the poem (though hardly as well). I've tried and tried to forgive her and then she pulls something new again and the old anger won't let go. I love her, she's my sister. But that's all I can say.
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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This was hard for me to read. My sister, ten years younger than I, destroyed my life with her lies and deceit. I could have written the poem (though hardly as well). I've tried and tried to forgive her and then she pulls something new again and the old anger won't let go. I love her, she's my sister. But that's all I can say.
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you for reading. I'm so sorry that yoy are going through that with your sister and I completely understand. I had a love -hate relationship with my sister, and the only thing I can say is to get together with her and tell her how you feel about the things that she's done. It may or may not make a difference in your relationship but I think it would help you in the long run. I wish i had more time with my sister. Not sure that i deserve the six stars but i truly appreciate it. God bless you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh this poem is so well deserving of your win and congratulations, I wish I had a six for you because this is so heartfelt and sad that it made me literally cry, I am not joking, tears are falling from my eyes. I have similar situation with my sister and I haven't seen her in a very long time, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Oh this poem is so well deserving of your win and congratulations, I wish I had a six for you because this is so heartfelt and sad that it made me literally cry, I am not joking, tears are falling from my eyes. I have similar situation with my sister and I haven't seen her in a very long time, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you for this kind review. Just my opinion but I think you should find your sister and clear the air, tell her you love her before it really is too late. I wish i had more time with carol. Thanks again.
Comment from Sherman541
Wow so very true and I have seen this happen and even to me too. My brother and I once very close, some how drifted apart. Then he married and the gap became a giant gape. Then other things came and went along the way until to this very day, he does not speak to me no matter how hard I try. So very sad. Congrats !! On the Win Sherman
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Wow so very true and I have seen this happen and even to me too. My brother and I once very close, some how drifted apart. Then he married and the gap became a giant gape. Then other things came and went along the way until to this very day, he does not speak to me no matter how hard I try. So very sad. Congrats !! On the Win Sherman
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Im sorry your brother doesnt speak to you. Try writing him a letter to tell him everything you feel, and if he doesn't acknowledge it, it will be him that will feel regret. Thanks again.
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Thank you - you are welcome I did write a letter about two years ago and I tried while our Mother was still alive to talk to him, but it ended up being a funeral we both went to no talking so sad, but you are right I do not regret but I miss and Love him and wish he would be a part of my life
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem that you penned for the contest and won. It is so full of sadness and lots of regret. You used very good words and I love the picture of you two. I am sorry that happened to you, but we as humans do things that we end up regretting if we don't set things right and forgive each other. I know I have done that! love, Teri
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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This is a very well written poem that you penned for the contest and won. It is so full of sadness and lots of regret. You used very good words and I love the picture of you two. I am sorry that happened to you, but we as humans do things that we end up regretting if we don't set things right and forgive each other. I know I have done that! love, Teri
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks so much for reading my poem. I wish i could turn back the clock and start again with my sister, but I believe she knows I love her whever she is.
Comment from patcelaw
It seems that some of the hardest relationships to heal are those of family members. I am hoping in two weeks that my remaining siblings and I will find healing for our relationships after the four of us not being together together after a 32 year separation. It will take place at the surprise birthday party for my twin brother and then five days later we will all be together again at a party for me.
My twin and I will be 80 years of age.Patricia,
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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It seems that some of the hardest relationships to heal are those of family members. I am hoping in two weeks that my remaining siblings and I will find healing for our relationships after the four of us not being together together after a 32 year separation. It will take place at the surprise birthday party for my twin brother and then five days later we will all be together again at a party for me.
My twin and I will be 80 years of age.Patricia,
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Im so glad that this is happening for you! I have a good feeling about it, would you please let me know how it went? Also, have a very happy birthday...mine is on June 3rd. :)
Comment from RFL
Hello B, Your poem has touched my heart. The emotions you welled up came through famously -- an eternal theme of guilt and regret. If I had another six this week, I would give it to you. Best, Rona
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Hello B, Your poem has touched my heart. The emotions you welled up came through famously -- an eternal theme of guilt and regret. If I had another six this week, I would give it to you. Best, Rona
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you so much for this nice review, It means a lot to me.
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely written poem, Boogie. Sometimes family members do try our last bit of patience, particularly when they tell such horrible lies.
You've written the story of a lifetime in good metre and rhyme and this is a terrific entry into the aftermath contest.
I wish you great luck in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Very nicely written poem, Boogie. Sometimes family members do try our last bit of patience, particularly when they tell such horrible lies.
You've written the story of a lifetime in good metre and rhyme and this is a terrific entry into the aftermath contest.
I wish you great luck in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing,
I appreciate it more than you know.
Comment from bob cullen
This is a really an outstanding poem with a message that is both powerful and true.
I loved the rhyme and the flow of the poem. But the poem's winning feature was undoubtedly the message that living with regret can be avoided by maintaining communication, even when you are angry at the other person.
Really well written
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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This is a really an outstanding poem with a message that is both powerful and true.
I loved the rhyme and the flow of the poem. But the poem's winning feature was undoubtedly the message that living with regret can be avoided by maintaining communication, even when you are angry at the other person.
Really well written
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you for this great review, i really appreciate it. I'm afraid I learned about letting go of anger too late...I just really miss my sister.
Comment from Tigerman55
How very true these words are. They remind me of my own situation with family members. One has to remember that we only pass by once in this world. Time is something that cannot be replaced no matter how hard we try. I think Boogienights has put into words what will make many people realise that one cannot turn back the clock.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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How very true these words are. They remind me of my own situation with family members. One has to remember that we only pass by once in this world. Time is something that cannot be replaced no matter how hard we try. I think Boogienights has put into words what will make many people realise that one cannot turn back the clock.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you for this nice review, I always appreciate it.
