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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from giraffmang
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Hi Bill,

This is disturbing and very funny. Yeah how'd you like to come to terms with having sex and then having them try to eat you alive... and not in a good way... shudder.

lol
GMG

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    That would call for a psychologist or ?prying mantis?.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, this made me smile Bill, an inventive write and PMSD will now be recorded in the medical journals, ha ha ha, whatever next, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute poem you have penned about the praying mantis. You used very cute words and the picture looks like it is totally wigging out! I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from BeasPeas
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Even praying/preying mantis has its struggles but the victims more so. This is a well done 5-7-5 and the image is striking. You are on a roll. It makes me wonder what is coming next. Marilyn

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 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Thanks, Marilyn