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Animal poetry and short stories

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Such cute critters in the picture. I hope the big bad condor didn't get them. Excellent rhyme and flow. I feel even sorrier for the weasels since you've given them names. As they had so many diseases, I hope the condor catches some of them and suffers too. Cleverly done. judi

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 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Judi
reply by judiverse on 08-Jun-2018
    You're very welcome. judi