Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

The world you imagine is beautiful and amazing, and I imagine your description is pretty accurate. Although we cannot be entirely certain about all the details, if our thoughts are pure and correct, we can imagine well how perfect it will be, and I hope you're right, God bless you!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thank you so much Brenda for the lovely review and comments. I just know it will be more than beautiful and amazing. May God bless you too! love, Teri

reply by brenda faye curtis on 15-Jun-2018

You're welcome, my friend. Have a blessed day! :)

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Teri, this is an amazing poem my wonderful friend...you have a wonderful imagination...I love every word in your poem...great rhythm and rhyme...and a beautiful picture...Teri this is awesome sweet girl...so very well thought of...and very well written...love you so much...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thank you so much my friend for the very nice review and lovely comments. I hope you are doing well! love you! Teri

reply by l.raven on 14-Jun-2018

I hope next week takes care of a lot of problems...we will see...you are always soooo welcome Teri...I love reading your poems...and seeing Greyson grow up...love you much...xxoo

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

I imagine these believes are a source of great comfort to you :)

Well done with this nicely constructed collection of rhyming couplets, Teri. I certainly think you've met the brief well. Best of luck in the contest to you.

Cheers,
Craig

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thank you so much Craig for the very good review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri

Comment from Mountainstar2

Exceptional

A loving poem written from the heart of the poet herself...

Wording content was beautiful and hits home to the reviewer as it brings tears to the eye. I like the poem, picture, and the way it is written. Also, the subject, and the message it sends out loud and clear, for each person to read!
Blessings, to you for doing so, too.
Mountainstar2..

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for the very loving review and very heartfelt comments~ love, Teri

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Teri. This is a good entry for the contest. Nicely rhymed and easy to read. Here

"We may not can tell if someone is lying, but". Maybe we can tell
Or
We not be able to tell
Or
We maybe can tell

Just suggestions. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thank you for the very nice review and nice comments! Blessings, Teri

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful vision of the return of Jesus! I like how you presented it centering the lines. I like how you show us both the joy and call us to be ready. Great job, Teri!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thank you so much Helen for the lovely review and nice comments! love, Teri

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Good luck in the contest with this positive poem which rhymes well. It tells of all the wonderful things to expect will happen when this life ends and we are on our spiritual journey. Marilyn

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thank you so much Marilyn for the excellent review and very nice comments. love, Teri

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I imagine Heaven with Him is a wonderful place to live.
I imagine there will be so much love for all to give.
I imagine there will be no hate, fear or judgment of any.
I imagine this as the love of God is true and plenty!
I imagine the deaf will hear and the blind will see.
I imagine a life without any heartache or disease for you or me.


I love that your imagination is fueled by God's word
Well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for the lovely review and very nice comments! May God bless you~ love, Teri

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

I imagine you are most truly right. I wish that things would all come to light for those who do not see. This is very beautiful and always well written. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Love you Sarah

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for the lovely review and very nice comments. There is no way we can even come close to how beautiful it will be there with our Lord! love you my friend! Teri

reply by Sherman541 on 13-Jun-2018

Yes I know and agree - you are so welcome

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry poem Teri. Good job on its style. You used great rhymes. I like the way you took the words 'I Imagine' & expanded on them in each line. Readers can easily tell that you believe this, how much it means to you, & that you thought a great deal in order to express your thoughts/ideas of what Heaven you believe. Good job & best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018

Thank you so much Jan for the lovely review and very nice comments. This is how I do believe, but I know there is truly no way to imagine how wonderful it will be! love, Teri