Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Easy to visualize the group of 90-year-olds (and plus) balancing the egg on the spoon while trying to avoid each other as they move about. I guess all the texting while walking our youth is now doing will be great practice for their turn at 90 year old egg dashes.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

You are so right, very good practice. Thanks for your great review.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Dear Anonymous Author,

Thank you for sharing your entry in the Sixty Word Dash. You have indeed told a complete story within the allotted word count. We know the recipient of the award is over ninety, and he was in an egg and spoon race, and he won. The presenter is well-spoken and there is a trophy for this honor.

Well done and good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thanks for the review Patty. Much appreciated.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Good little piece of flash here for the competition. Not expecting the ending which is always nice. lol

Well deserved could probably do with being hyphenated here.

Also catagory should be category.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thank you so much G. I know I can always rely on you to spot the mistakes. Have nice day. X

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hey...don't laugh, folks!
It could happen.
It sounds as if old Bill had a leg up on the competition, Anonymous Author.
Having said that, it's probably best this was an egg 'n' spoon race and not a dog show...if you get my drift.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth.
~Dean

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thanks Dean.

reply by Dean Kuch on 15-Jun-2018

Yep...

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent story and entry for the short story contest
That must have been quite a race,
though I did see a video of a man over ninety who still runs track
and faster than I can. lol
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS


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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Many thanks.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Delightful tongue-in-cheek humor in this short-short. We can easily visualize the Narrator handing William the trophy as the victor is wheezing and gasping for breath.

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Many thanks. So glad you enjoyed it.