The Life of a Unibunnifly
The Life of a...contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Cybertron1986
"When by theirself, they're lame." This line had me laughing since it basically justified everything your piece was implying. An enjoyable and entertaining read
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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"When by theirself, they're lame." This line had me laughing since it basically justified everything your piece was implying. An enjoyable and entertaining read
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Cybertron. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, this is a very cleverly written entry for this unusual competition. I can't imagine how you got a picture so suited to the description and story in the poem. Just great and what great descriptions to create images of this unusual combination of creatures. A real bitsa, a bit of bunny, unicorn, and butterfly. It was like a Grimms fairytale at the bitter end though, wasn't it? I thought that funny, a good twist, instead of the 'happy ever after' storyline. A heinous death for a poor unsupported thing. Well, at least you kept your word and made the poem great, LOL
Thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Hello, this is a very cleverly written entry for this unusual competition. I can't imagine how you got a picture so suited to the description and story in the poem. Just great and what great descriptions to create images of this unusual combination of creatures. A real bitsa, a bit of bunny, unicorn, and butterfly. It was like a Grimms fairytale at the bitter end though, wasn't it? I thought that funny, a good twist, instead of the 'happy ever after' storyline. A heinous death for a poor unsupported thing. Well, at least you kept your word and made the poem great, LOL
Thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Ana. I concocted this ridiculous picture up myself. Lol. I was just in one of those moods to poke some fun at the people who write about these. I couldn't help myself. Ha. I really appreciate the gracious stars, Ana. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great rest of your weekend.
