Tears
A Tanka beginning and ending with the same word6 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
I used to once upon a time, Anonymous Poet.
But no more.
There are those who cry "happy tears" and those who cry tears of sadness.
Then, there are those individuals like myself who rarely cry at all.
So sorry about your friend's husband.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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I used to once upon a time, Anonymous Poet.
But no more.
There are those who cry "happy tears" and those who cry tears of sadness.
Then, there are those individuals like myself who rarely cry at all.
So sorry about your friend's husband.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thank you Dean, for reading and reviewing this short poem on Tears. There are many reasons for happy tears and for sad tears. But I suspect there are also many reasons for no tears. But that's when gin does come in handy. Appreciate your dropping by.
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Sure, June.
Anytime.
Comment from donette1914
outstanding of a world within a single teardrop and your ending until it no longer can. i love how you write and i feel you have a wonderful chance at winning and it was a pleasure to read
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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outstanding of a world within a single teardrop and your ending until it no longer can. i love how you write and i feel you have a wonderful chance at winning and it was a pleasure to read
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
This is a very very unique on starting with the word can in it with the same word can and the little scenario is very cute and a little romantic thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This is a very very unique on starting with the word can in it with the same word can and the little scenario is very cute and a little romantic thank you for sharing
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments!
Comment from rama devi
Poignant! Sending healing thoughts to your friends in hospice. I am certain this poem would touch thier hearts deeply. Great use of CAN in opening and closing. Excellent alliteration and consonance of W. Flows like a river is a nice and fitting simile, though slightly cliche. A world in teardrop is nice too. Reminds me of the famous 'world in a grain of sand and eternity in an hour' line.
Bravo and good luck,
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Poignant! Sending healing thoughts to your friends in hospice. I am certain this poem would touch thier hearts deeply. Great use of CAN in opening and closing. Excellent alliteration and consonance of W. Flows like a river is a nice and fitting simile, though slightly cliche. A world in teardrop is nice too. Reminds me of the famous 'world in a grain of sand and eternity in an hour' line.
Bravo and good luck,
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your insightful review, especially since you are not feeling in top form right now. Feel better soon!
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Thanks. Tinnitus is intense. Can't sleep! :)
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful poem where love is captured and always will be wonderful artwork, this is very well combined and written, best wishes for your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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What a beautiful poem where love is captured and always will be wonderful artwork, this is very well combined and written, best wishes for your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, educational and interesting, well presented, poem has a lot of meaning,
image to match, fascinating colour, tears of joy comes to mind, two people in love.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Good read, educational and interesting, well presented, poem has a lot of meaning,
image to match, fascinating colour, tears of joy comes to mind, two people in love.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your sharing your insights.
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You're welcome! :)
