Comment from Julia Scanlon Was Leyshon

Exceptional

oh wow I can see why this won a prize. The imagery is beautiful and draws you in- I sense sadness but happiness at the same time. I sort of wanted it to be just a dream but that would have been predictable. Just lovely, my sort of poem

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for the six stars..it made my day. I'm so glad you liked it.

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

I love the way this poem flowed together so nicely! So many great descriptive words as well, the really helped paint a picture in my mind of your idea of Heaven. Keep up the good work!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for the wonderful review and the six stars! It means a lot! :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fanciful and faithful write with a dream-like quality and warm sentiments throughout on the stairway to heaven, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a poem that makes the reader feel good. You have a vivid use of words that well describes a heavenly feeling. I like the image of the sea and then rising to heaven. Excellent poetic form.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you for your kind words.