Be Wee With Bea
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Dance"An allegory in the Winnie the Pooh genre
8 total reviews
Comment from Possummagic
It's lovely to see someone who loves to sing and dance, it makes us want to join in. Music makes the world go around. I like your writing style. It's an enjoyable story. PM
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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It's lovely to see someone who loves to sing and dance, it makes us want to join in. Music makes the world go around. I like your writing style. It's an enjoyable story. PM
Comment Written 07-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed and that you appreciate my style of writing. If you read Ch. 1 you will appreciate the whole concept more. I only gers better. I like the name you have chosen. I always called them "Little Face" when I'd see them as O was coming home from work at midnight.
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Our possums are cute to look at but not very friendly. They also get into our roofs and creat havoc. The name Possum was given to me thirty years ago by my husband who was running a course I was attending. He said I looked like a cute possum because I have huge eyes. Lol the magic I added later and became my clothing label for the clothes I sewed for my children. PM
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Sorry about your possum unmagic at your home. But your name is a redeeming quality. Clever of your husband.
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Yes he still calls me Poss after thirty years. Often children think he?s calling me ?boss? which gets a few laughs! PM
Comment from BeasPeas
What a delightful chapter in your book, Liz. I was fascinated by your wonderful concepts--so well described. I regret not to have a sixer for you, but will surely be reading more about Bea. As you see, my pen name is Beaspeas as my mom was named Bea and wrote poetry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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What a delightful chapter in your book, Liz. I was fascinated by your wonderful concepts--so well described. I regret not to have a sixer for you, but will surely be reading more about Bea. As you see, my pen name is Beaspeas as my mom was named Bea and wrote poetry. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed and that you appreciate my style of writing. If you read Ch. 1 you will appreciate the whole concept more. I actually have a friend who is 100 named Bea. She's still going strong.
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My mom made it to 89. One hundred is great if in good health. God bless her. Marilyn
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I didn't read the first chapter, so haven't been introduces to Bea before now. I read this with much interest and I do think that children as adults alike can learn from this wee Bea. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Hi there, I didn't read the first chapter, so haven't been introduces to Bea before now. I read this with much interest and I do think that children as adults alike can learn from this wee Bea. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed and that you appreciate my style of writing. If you read Ch. 1 you will appreciate the whole concept more. To be wee eventually changes as be becomes more spiritual.
Comment from Zue65
Children and adult alike would love to read the story of Bea, the wee bear. The exercises done by Bea are quite interesting and refreshing and made the story more enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Children and adult alike would love to read the story of Bea, the wee bear. The exercises done by Bea are quite interesting and refreshing and made the story more enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your enjoyable review. If you read Chap 1 you will be caught up. It's called Wishing to Be Wee. It gives the whole set up for the exercises. She learns so much about herself from her exercises. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Bruno Thomas
Bea absolutely loves life and dancing. You have really captured this in what she feels in her heart. These songs have been special over the years. Great write. Keep going. Cheers, Brian
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Bea absolutely loves life and dancing. You have really captured this in what she feels in her heart. These songs have been special over the years. Great write. Keep going. Cheers, Brian
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your upbeat review. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much and that you got the meaning I was attempting to convey.
Comment from Sugarray77
I was mesmerized by the music and exercises. Stopping to pause and see how each exercise fit the music/ or no music, did make for a choppy read. Very imaginative and well developed. Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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I was mesmerized by the music and exercises. Stopping to pause and see how each exercise fit the music/ or no music, did make for a choppy read. Very imaginative and well developed. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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I am so glad you liked my Ch 2. I got some rough reviews for my 1st Ch. I know we're supposed to have tough skin. But I do until I don't. Thank you.
Comment from Beck Fenton
I like this Bea and the things she notices. I'm a nature lover, too. I think it's interesting to see how Bea deals with unhappy memories. I never thought about using water sounds to focus on happier thoughts.
Good job, as always!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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I like this Bea and the things she notices. I'm a nature lover, too. I think it's interesting to see how Bea deals with unhappy memories. I never thought about using water sounds to focus on happier thoughts.
Good job, as always!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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I am so glad you liked my Ch 2. I got some rough reviews for my 1st Ch. I know we're supposed to have tough skin. But I do until I don't. Thank you. I had to nurse my wounds for a little while.
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Just keep on writing what you love...
Comment from Beto1
Great chapter! I love the emphasis of the words, "PLANNING", "BULLYING", "ANGER", and other words. It gives pep to the sentences. Also, I enjoyed the connection of Bea and the water. Continue writing!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Great chapter! I love the emphasis of the words, "PLANNING", "BULLYING", "ANGER", and other words. It gives pep to the sentences. Also, I enjoyed the connection of Bea and the water. Continue writing!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thank you for affirming my style. Some don't like it. But 2 of us do. Actually, there may be a couple more. I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you catch the 1st Chapter. It would add more for you.
