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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a fantastic tale of Gerbil World 2 their doing the deed and attitude in making fun of it using the opportunity of exploitation in a fun doing for living happily and naturally; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    Thanks, ALD