Summer Rain
A peaceful day at home.16 total reviews
Comment from SueZen
Lovely, posing a question versus making a statement ! Please do haha....
Actually I can imagine what you might say is similar to what I would tell you,
as have enjoyed many a cozy, quiet rainy day, just watching the raindrops fall
on my window pane, nothing particular on my mind, content with just 'being',
enjoying the moment...at peace with myself, nice and cozy.
Perfect pic to compliment your words.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Lovely, posing a question versus making a statement ! Please do haha....
Actually I can imagine what you might say is similar to what I would tell you,
as have enjoyed many a cozy, quiet rainy day, just watching the raindrops fall
on my window pane, nothing particular on my mind, content with just 'being',
enjoying the moment...at peace with myself, nice and cozy.
Perfect pic to compliment your words.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Aaaah, thanks so much. I?m so glad you got the intent and meaning. I really love rainy days when I can stay home and just ?be?. Thanks again.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, I will listen. But your picture says it all. Good job pairing your words + great picture. I enjoyed reading this & thinking about the soft rain & cool weather. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Yes, I will listen. But your picture says it all. Good job pairing your words + great picture. I enjoyed reading this & thinking about the soft rain & cool weather. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the great review. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nicely done. I enjoyed the feel of this poem. Congrats on your third place finish. I wish there had been more votes cast in this contest. Jeesh, a seven way tie!
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Nicely done. I enjoyed the feel of this poem. Congrats on your third place finish. I wish there had been more votes cast in this contest. Jeesh, a seven way tie!
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thanks! I was surprised too, but it happens, I guess. I appreciate your review!
Comment from WalkerMan
Ah, the many ways one could spend such a day.... If alone, you could read that book you bought (or were given) but hadn't gotten to, write something, engage in your hobby, fix something, or just laze around to catch up on missed sleep. On the other hand, if you are not alone, you could play a serious game of Scrabble, chess, or "How steamy can we make the windows?"....
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Ah, the many ways one could spend such a day.... If alone, you could read that book you bought (or were given) but hadn't gotten to, write something, engage in your hobby, fix something, or just laze around to catch up on missed sleep. On the other hand, if you are not alone, you could play a serious game of Scrabble, chess, or "How steamy can we make the windows?"....
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks for a fun review. I?ve had lots of comments about how different ones would spend a rainy day. It?s great to see most of us think alike. Appreciate your thoughts.
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You are welcome. I like the open possibilities of this; and perhaps others do as well, for your post is climbing in the vote tally. -- Mike
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very nice mood created with only ten well-chosen words! Excellent use of artwork, color and font for a pleasing visual appearance. I see nothing to correct. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Very nice mood created with only ten well-chosen words! Excellent use of artwork, color and font for a pleasing visual appearance. I see nothing to correct. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from victor 66
The wonderful thing about rain is that you may want to walk in it or you may want to watch it through a window while you're near a nice fire. The best thing about rain, is if you have a choice whether to be out in it or not. Your ten words are well said. Good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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The wonderful thing about rain is that you may want to walk in it or you may want to watch it through a window while you're near a nice fire. The best thing about rain, is if you have a choice whether to be out in it or not. Your ten words are well said. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much. I appreciate your comments and review.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ten-word poem. On a rainy day it is always great to get comfortable inside the house with a book to read and a warm blanket around us just looking outside the window as the rain falls down.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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A very well-written ten-word poem. On a rainy day it is always great to get comfortable inside the house with a book to read and a warm blanket around us just looking outside the window as the rain falls down.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This ten-word poem, Summer Rain, uses thirteen syllables and three lines to note the significance of a peaceful, quiet, air cleansing rain that helps the mind, body, and soul relax and re-calibrate.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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This ten-word poem, Summer Rain, uses thirteen syllables and three lines to note the significance of a peaceful, quiet, air cleansing rain that helps the mind, body, and soul relax and re-calibrate.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the great comments and review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a lovely, romantic image. Your ten little words are so poetic. Your cursive font and that wonderful photo add volumes to the appeal of this piece. I think that I am reading the winner.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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What a lovely, romantic image. Your ten little words are so poetic. Your cursive font and that wonderful photo add volumes to the appeal of this piece. I think that I am reading the winner.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much, Debbie, for the review and comments!
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nicely composed in this simple question. Illustrated beautifully. A rainy day is cozy. It helps us to regroup our thoughts or just curl up and enjoy it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Very nicely composed in this simple question. Illustrated beautifully. A rainy day is cozy. It helps us to regroup our thoughts or just curl up and enjoy it. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks for the great review and comments!
